Title: Awwww...
Reviewed By: trichloroethane [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 06:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...I always wondered why 'reverse ageing' fics were in such short supply. You did a great job on this one, and it's so cute *squee*. Explanations: Spelling and Grammar: Decent grammar, a lot better than some fics I've seen. However, your spelling's a tad...odd, to say the least. For example, to not know something is generally written as 'don't know', not 'dono'. Or maybe you're trying to capture the accents? Not sure. Anyhow, just be careful with your spelling and use Spell Check please, it really helps. Proof-reading your finished work is also useful. Originality/Creativity: Um...you got a perfect score. Like I said, almost NO ONE does these things for this fandom, so it's great that you've taken the initiative to do so. Enjoyment: I loved the way you put so much humour into this fanfic without making it seem contrived and making the fic dissolve into random, annoying chaos. Good job. The plot is also consistent, so it's easy to follow. Overall: It's just the average of all my other ratings (in this case divided by 3, as I only rated 3 things instead of 4). What does that tell you about your grammar? *wink wink nudge nudge* Also, you might want to fix up the story in Ch. 3, as I think you repeated the whole thing twice. Great job, and I hope you update soon! Thanks! PS I'm sorry if this review comes off as a little condescending, but seriously, I love it. I'm just really strict when it comes to grammar and spelling, as bad spelling can really take away the joy of reading an otherwise well-written fanfic. Nice job!
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