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| "Novicain for the Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: MORE PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: canti32 On: June 04, 2004 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was probably THE BEST fanfic i have ever read. PLEASE write more like this one. It was totally awesome!!!
| Title: Ingenious Writing Here
Reviewed By: Valkyrie Profile (thebouncer33@msn.com) On: April 28, 2004 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is how you do a fanfic. It was in no way cheesy, it wasn't predictable, the pacing was great, the emotion and dialogue and description and everything was near -perfect-. You did an awesome job writing this, and whoever helped you edit it had some major skills as well. I really hope you continue this. The relationship between Mamami and Naota was probably the best, and most intelligent written incarnate of it I've seen.. and I'm a mega huge FLCL fan. And the love scene was incredibly tasteful, but without lacking, well, the emotion and intensity needed to be a good love scene. Really good stuff here. Looking forward to more.
| Reviewed By: Atomska On: March 14, 2004 12:16 EST
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I still think you are a genious. And if you listen to Simple and Clean while reading this fic it's awesome.
| Reviewed By: Atomska On: March 14, 2004 12:16 EST
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I still think you are a genious. And if you listen to Simple and Clean while reading this fic it's awesome.
| Reviewed By: kessondalek@msn.com On: March 05, 2004 22:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap. that was awesome.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Heero Yuy 01 On: February 21, 2004 18:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...*searching for words*........uhh.....great, stuependous, and brilliant doesnt even really come close to describing this fic. In total I've read it about 4x, and each time I was captivated to the point where i forgot where i was, what i was doing prior, and what i should be doing. Your style of writing and use of description is one to envied by an aspiring writer such as myself. It is such a great story and i love the way you kept every one in character. My only complaint has to do with FF.net not letting you post the lemon part, thoughthe censor bars didnt really break the flow of the story for me. Anyway i've probably bored you with my prattle but onve again great fic.
| Title: Sorry!
Reviewed By: LRSK On: February 13, 2004 01:20 EST
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Ooops, disregard the reviewer name! she was still logged in at MM.org anyways, if you do want some contact with me for some unknown reason, u can email me at lastredseaskin@yahoo.com See ya! Oh yeah, great fic!
| Title: LRSK
Reviewed By: Miss Siopao [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...That was long...but the thing was, the length was PERFECT! I don't think it would have been as good as it was if it hadn't been for the perfect length! Oh, man...I have never watched an episode of FLCL in my life, butI kind of did some research on it, and found that this fic was so profoundly described take on the emotions of the characters! Absolutely lovely!! Damn... Well, anyways, I remember you from FF.Net when you used to write Taiora fics!! Just to tell you, I am a hardcore Taiora fan still!!! Oh, but that isn't what this is all about. Well, that's all I can say right now, but...but again...wow. Breathtakingly amazing (if I do say so myself. Lol.)
| Reviewed By: Atomska On: February 09, 2004 20:33 EST
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YOU ARE A GENIOUS!!!! THAT WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!! CONTINUE WORK LIKE THIS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE A DIVINE KNOWLEDGE OF EMOTION!!!!!!!!!!
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