| "Novicain for the Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: botc [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2011 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just wow. Really nice work. At first I thought that Mamimi was way to confident and happy, but I kept going, because the story in itself was extremely well. And then, bham! You nailed it, when she opened up to naota. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2011 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Novicain for the Soul is a MASTERPIECE. You are a great author. |
Reviewed By: morgannia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
by far the best FLCL fic, i've ever enountered & believe me, i've looked. your characterizations are dead on and your writing is just gorgous. i've read & reread this story so many time here & on ff.net & it remains one of my favorites. never fails to make me cry - just outstanding.
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Reviewed By: zeeksice44 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the graetist stories i'v ever read keep up the good work!!
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Title: Another WOWer
Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Logan, you've managed to do it again. You've written an incredible, emotional story. The first story of your's that I ever read was Faded Scars in its original posting on the DaD. I was amazed then, and I am still amazed by your writing now.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: XxAbriannaxX On: July 09, 2005 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This MUST be the GREATEST FLCL fanfic I've ever read. EVER. On fanfiction.net this story is on my fav's list. I've read this fic so many times, it might be burned into my brain. You are one of the good writers in fanfiction .
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Title: Pretty Good...
Reviewed By: tasslehoffer On: June 10, 2005 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are certainly among the better authors around this network and deserve some praise. I disagreed with some of your characterizations, but despite that, it was still a basically quality work. I hope to encounter some of your future works. Sayonara! -Tasslehoffer
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Title: Intoxicating Brilliance
Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words fail to describe this masterpiece. The ending was beyond gorgeous.
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Title: *astounded silence followed by insane applause*
Reviewed By: copypaste [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought I'd ever say this about a piece of fanfiction, but this is quite possibly the most emotional, most thought-provoking, most beautiful, most powerful, and overall the best thing that I've ever read. I've never known anyone to write as animatedly and, to coin an over-used term, profound as this. It took me a long long time to finish reading it, but I never felt the urge to skip ahead or just start scanning through it. Every word kept me attentive, waiting patiently for what was to come. I found myself turning off my music at certain points because it didn't fit the atmosphere at all. I could practically hear Novacain for the Soul in my head as The Atomsks performed on stage in front of the enthralled little devils. There aren't very many skilled fanfic writers around, especially who can pull off an FLCL fanfic so perfectly. You captured the complexity and abstract mentality of FLCL well, and utilized it to your own needs perfectly. I won't say that it needed more humor, because it really didn't. That would only 'soften the blow', so to speak. Sometimes it's best to not relieve the readers with lighthearted humor, especially with such themes as presented in this fic. Melancholy and fury compliment eachother well. Ride on...
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 11:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 13:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: panuru4u On: July 24, 2004 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good piece...i got chills from reading it. Though its a lemon fic(not really though), this is definately one of the best fics i have ever read. I just can't believe how good this fic is, and kudos to the editor for a marvelous job. The caliber of the content just blows my mind away...i drown in the details of the story, and i wish i could hear the music. WOW!
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Reviewed By: Raidin On: July 23, 2004 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a pro. I think that with this level of wrtting you could become one of the greatist authors ever. This story is on par with another story I am curently read called Believe by Hentai-Kun. And that said it's jusy another complament in which there can never be enough. I hope you write more. That would make me and some other very happy.
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Reviewed By: wakizashi On: June 30, 2004 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i believe their is a fine line btween genious and insanity. you were like a child at one of those state boarders, jumping from one to another as you laghf insainly at your own antics. reminds me of my time in the assylum....ahhh....thats a compliment
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Reviewed By: wakizashi On: June 30, 2004 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i believe their is a fine line btween genious and insanity. you were like a child at one of those state boarders, jumping from one to another as you laghf insainly at your own antics. reminds me of my time in the assylum....ahhh....thats a compliment
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