| "After the Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 02, 2005 16:35 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 19, 2005 15:55 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 19, 2005 15:55 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 05, 2005 18:55 CDT
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please add more to this story soon please i loved it.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 18, 2005 21:23 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great please add more to this story soon.
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Title: plz keep writing
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: February 03, 2005 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz keep writin lol im gettin impatient lol plz i wanna kno wat happens next update soon :) Wrigzz
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Title: aghhhh
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: December 06, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aghhhhhhhh damn y do u gotta quit at such a great point please continue this story is so freackin awesome i wanna to read this fight o man its not fair please continue soon aghhhhhh plz ne way i really liked the date i thought it sounded like what a date between yukina and kuwabara would be like. ne way ya plz continure soon im lookin forward to Hiei kicken sum shinobi ass
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: November 08, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took so long to review end of markin period and unfortuanelty end of football :( , but o well. ne way o man, its gettin suspenseful i cant wait to see the fight seens for the next chapter. i cant wait for another update please keep writing.
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Title: Oh, my...
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 29, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I will try to translate this comment with a translator's help. I hope you can understand me. ^_^ I loved the chapter. And I hate Ren. ¬_¬ I am very anxious to see how will behis confrontation with Kurama. I have hopes that him (the fox) and Botan can have a happy end. They suffered so much... And me also, I should say. ^_^;;; Please, continue soon. I will wait eagerly. =D
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 20:52 CDT
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hm.. random observation. Yoh seems alot like seaman... you rock, this is such an awesome fic! ^_^ -kerina
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Title: Fantástico!
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 19, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Não tenho palavras. Maravilhoso esse fanfic. Sofro mais a cada capítulo e não consigo parar de ler. Adoro os vilões, adoro a interação Kurama/Botan, adoro as cenas hilárias do Kuwabara e Yusuke brigando, especialmente adorei como colocou o Reikai, com toda uma estrutura que não conhecemos no anime. Perfeito, ainda estou no capítulo 24, mas adorei tudo. ^__^ Spooky Ps. Desculpe escrever em português. Não domino muito bem o inglês e achei que seria melhor escrever algo em meu idioma que não escrever nada. ^^ Continue!!
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: September 28, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice dude i love the suspense. I hope u get another chapter out soon i love this story so much. O btw i would like a happy ending im sappy like that but o well. Plz write the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: wrigzz On: September 01, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo dude sorry i couldnt review sooner i have been busy lately cuza football camp but i can finally review, ne way... another great chapter and im sure the kuwabara yukina date will b funny thanx for xplainin the stuff of the war sounds good :). cant wait to see(/read w/e) whoever kurama fights. plz keep writin i love this story. thanx ~wrigzz
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: July 31, 2004 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo man another amazing chapter. This is definately gettin good. Btw i kno how u feel trust me. my dad left b4 i was born. (which definately sucks :(. and to make it better my mom decides to make herself feel better by becoming an alchoholic. My life sucks sumtimes, I mean everyones does. I see where your comin from tho. Wish ure bro a happy b-day for me. Plz keep writing when ever you get the chance and trust me shit gets better, i kno. Great chap plz keep writing.
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Reviewed By: ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is one of the best I've ever read, even better than alot of published books I've read! I have to agree w/ kerina about the people getting the most reviews all write really junk stories, hillarious, but the writting isn't a fraction as good as yours. Alot of people are just too lazy to review *cough*me*cough* so its okay if you don't get alot and the people who get all the reviews all seem to review eachothers stories which is part of the reason they get so many reviews. I love this story! and I never liked Botan+Kurama befor I read his either!!!
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