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Title: Heart breaking
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a heart breaking chapter, Ototou-san. I didn't see that coming... not Ren stealing Karama's ki and using it against him to replace him as Botan's lifemate. That was a dirty trick. I am curious though... if he stole his powers, how did Karama manage to change into Youko at the last moment and avoid the dragons bite? That was aa bit confusing. I liked it, but it was a bit confusion. I have been reading your blog lately... you sound depressed. I have been absent from the world of the living myself for nigh on 3 months. I'm so sorry you are not at your best. Be that as it may... you are in my thoughts daily, koishii-tou-san. My prayers are always with you. Aishiteru, your ni-san
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 03, 2005 19:25 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: October 02, 2005 16:35 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 19, 2005 15:55 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 19, 2005 15:55 CDT
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please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 05, 2005 18:55 CDT
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please add more to this story soon please i loved it.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 18, 2005 21:23 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great please add more to this story soon.
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Title: plz keep writing
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: February 03, 2005 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz keep writin lol im gettin impatient lol plz i wanna kno wat happens next update soon :) Wrigzz
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Title: aghhhh
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: December 06, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aghhhhhhhh damn y do u gotta quit at such a great point please continue this story is so freackin awesome i wanna to read this fight o man its not fair please continue soon aghhhhhh plz ne way i really liked the date i thought it sounded like what a date between yukina and kuwabara would be like. ne way ya plz continure soon im lookin forward to Hiei kicken sum shinobi ass
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: November 08, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry it took so long to review end of markin period and unfortuanelty end of football :( , but o well. ne way o man, its gettin suspenseful i cant wait to see the fight seens for the next chapter. i cant wait for another update please keep writing.
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Title: Oh, my...
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 29, 2004 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I will try to translate this comment with a translator's help. I hope you can understand me. ^_^ I loved the chapter. And I hate Ren. ¬_¬ I am very anxious to see how will behis confrontation with Kurama. I have hopes that him (the fox) and Botan can have a happy end. They suffered so much... And me also, I should say. ^_^;;; Please, continue soon. I will wait eagerly. =D
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 20:52 CDT
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hm.. random observation. Yoh seems alot like seaman... you rock, this is such an awesome fic! ^_^ -kerina
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Title: Fantástico!
Reviewed By: Spooky-dono On: October 19, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Não tenho palavras. Maravilhoso esse fanfic. Sofro mais a cada capítulo e não consigo parar de ler. Adoro os vilões, adoro a interação Kurama/Botan, adoro as cenas hilárias do Kuwabara e Yusuke brigando, especialmente adorei como colocou o Reikai, com toda uma estrutura que não conhecemos no anime. Perfeito, ainda estou no capítulo 24, mas adorei tudo. ^__^ Spooky Ps. Desculpe escrever em português. Não domino muito bem o inglês e achei que seria melhor escrever algo em meu idioma que não escrever nada. ^^ Continue!!
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: September 28, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice dude i love the suspense. I hope u get another chapter out soon i love this story so much. O btw i would like a happy ending im sappy like that but o well. Plz write the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: wrigzz On: September 01, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo dude sorry i couldnt review sooner i have been busy lately cuza football camp but i can finally review, ne way... another great chapter and im sure the kuwabara yukina date will b funny thanx for xplainin the stuff of the war sounds good :). cant wait to see(/read w/e) whoever kurama fights. plz keep writin i love this story. thanx ~wrigzz
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: July 31, 2004 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo man another amazing chapter. This is definately gettin good. Btw i kno how u feel trust me. my dad left b4 i was born. (which definately sucks :(. and to make it better my mom decides to make herself feel better by becoming an alchoholic. My life sucks sumtimes, I mean everyones does. I see where your comin from tho. Wish ure bro a happy b-day for me. Plz keep writing when ever you get the chance and trust me shit gets better, i kno. Great chap plz keep writing.
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Reviewed By: ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is one of the best I've ever read, even better than alot of published books I've read! I have to agree w/ kerina about the people getting the most reviews all write really junk stories, hillarious, but the writting isn't a fraction as good as yours. Alot of people are just too lazy to review *cough*me*cough* so its okay if you don't get alot and the people who get all the reviews all seem to review eachothers stories which is part of the reason they get so many reviews. I love this story! and I never liked Botan+Kurama befor I read his either!!!
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Reviewed By: ellamoony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 00:09 CDT
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Reviewed By: ellamoony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was awesome i love how every one thinks kurama is cold hearted and are suprised when he comes quickly to the aid of his friends and his quote "i can't believe i once thought of love as a waste of time" it was so cute, please update soon, you are an awesome author and truly talented and gifted person! don't ever put yourself down! on ff.net you have 550+ reviews, that many people think you are good please don't disappoint them, they're all expecting you to finish your fic. we all support you all the way! heck you can compete with the best professional writers out there! especially in romance categories! i wonder if you've ever considered that, it's a very likely possiblity! well good bye for now and please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: -kerina On: July 25, 2004 00:51 CDT
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listen, you are way to hard on your self. you are an awesome author. its just the thirty-something chapters that i think scares people off. the authors that seem to get the most reveiws are the crappy, stupid 5 year olds who can hardly write. the ones who make them and their freinds on a talk show called bash kwabara for example. you are an AWESOME author. you are descriptive and vivid, your characters are very true to the story, your new characters are life-like, your attacks are very real, you rock. you rock like elizabeth haydon. (she wrote rhapsody) you are an awesome author. i am currently writing a fanfic, and it is nothing in comparison to yours. your fanfiction is by far the best written fanfic i have read. i will admit, i like some better, but mainly because i am horibly in love with yu yu hakusho/inuyasha kagome/kurama fics. your fanfics rock. your lack of reviews are simply because not alot of people seem to enjoy botan-kurama fics. (from my point of veiw) not because you dont write well. you are an awesome writer. belive me, i have been reading books for as long as i can remember. i would rate you up there with jrr tolkien and elizabeth haydon, and all those other authors. i hope your life improves and gets better, and i am sorry for the short crappy please finish reveiws i left. but hey, dont be discouraged by the number of reviews. (my grand total is one.)i really hope you continue writing, if not on mediaminer. i will pray for you. God bless you. -kerina.
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Reviewed By: Wrigzz On: July 07, 2004 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn this is definately the best story i have ever read plz update as soon as u can. I hope when u r done u will write more stories. Plz upedate soon :)
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