| "After the Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: YYH Fan On: February 11, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story! I love how funny it can be at times, especially that incident with Kuwabara and the pink poncho! God that was so freakin hilarious! Your dialouge is excellent and the characters are so like the show, I almost feel as if it could be on TV! Yeah, this could be the fourth saga! Mwa Ha Ha Ha. *cough* Anyway, bummer at your lack of reviews but hey, I reviewed! The other people are probably too scared!
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Reviewed By: Shuten On: February 08, 2004 22:42 CST
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Man, this just keeps getting better and better! So the dude on the bike was really a woman eh? Interesting! And it's seems she's fixated with Kurama too. Talk about creepy! Well, good job and don't quit! I really like this story!
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Reviewed By: Cochise On: February 08, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Never read a fic like this before. Very professional and thank God not Yaoi! I'm so sick of that stuff anyway! The scene in the coffee shop was cool too! Excellent all around! Please don't quit! I know other people will review this! So please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shuten On: February 05, 2004 20:22 CST
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Cool! Another chapter! And so soon! Love the Hiei/Mukuro interaction! And Kurama and Botan's thoughts about the past were really well done! But who was the dude on the bike that attacked Kurama? Man, I want to know!
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Reviewed By: Shuten On: February 04, 2004 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome start to what looks like a great story! Kurama and Botan fics are my fav! And Hiei seems to be in character. Hell, all the characters are as they should be! Keep it coming!
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