| "Behind Blue Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: March 14, 2004 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo, u killed Noraaaaaa!!!! Or maybe she's in a coma. Eithe way, OH THE INUMANITY OF IT AAAAALLLL! It just aint fair i tell ya!!!
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Title: Behind Blue Eyes..
Reviewed By: siti On: March 13, 2004 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWaaaahh, *sob,sob* did Nora die??? T_T continue soon please, this fic is getting angstier by the chapter, but i still love it. continue soon and add more lemony 2x1 scenes, Yuuummyyy. \/^_^\/
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 02:12 CST
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Another rollercoaster chapter... I really think that Heero is Hikari; he's dreaming more than just what Nora had told him. So were her excursions actually visits to a hospital or something like that? It sounds like she has cancer and is getting chemotherapy. So - is she in a coma or...? : ( You handled Duo and Heero taking their relationship to the next level beautifully. This is a fantastic fic so far!
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Reviewed By: Me On: March 05, 2004 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHEM! Excuse me, but where is your weekly update? If my calculations prove me correct I believe it's been about TWO weeks, since your last WEEKLY update... I Love your writing! I check your web site like every chance I get to see if you've updated... but you haven't, and it makes me sad because I love your writing so much! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE please add another chapter soon! I Don't how long I can wait!
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Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. Oh how you left me with a wonderful smile on my face! Go Duo and Heero! I love them so much. And,...Heero and Nora. Is she really his mother? It would mend that heart of her to know that he was still alive and he would have a void filled in his heart that he now has a mother, and who better than the one person to take him out of his shell. Heero's family is there. All he needs is Duo and Nora and he could live his life to the fullest. *sighs happily* I love this story soooooo much. I look very much forward to the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful work of writing and may the creativity be with you! lol. Byebye!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: February 21, 2004 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This fanfic is AMAZING! First of all it's really inspirational, you see despair and how with the help of Nora and his willingness Heero over comes it. Your writing style is wonderful, it depicts all emotions making them feel real. The place and setting is authentic, it is not a happy ever after, nor it is a situation where Heero wallows in self pitty, turns to drugs, self mutilation and the likes. I love it how you gradually made Duo and Heero find eachother. That makeout session was HOT! Update soon and keep up the fascinating, amazing and wonderful job.
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Reviewed By: siti On: February 21, 2004 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue soon please, ONNEEGGAAIIII??? \/^___~\/ this fic totally rockzzz. poor Hee-chan,.....*sob,sob*....hope Duo can make Heero life much more happier soon. i can't wait to read some 2x1 SStteaammmmyyyyy LLeeemmmoooonnnyyy scenes after reading that last chapter. \/^____~\/ i really love Nora, she is such a strong character, love her very much. keep-up the good work, and continue soon! \/^_____~\/
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Reviewed By: oddone88 On: February 21, 2004 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you rock!!!! duoxheero.com is totaly wicked and this fan fic keeps getting better and better. keep up the awsome job
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Title: Linel17@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: February 20, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man that was great. Is there more. Its quite obvious who Nora is to Heero and visa versa is there going to be another chappie explaining that or does it just end right here? Well all in all this is great, keep up the good work. Chow Babe ;)
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Title: Befused and Confuddled
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this fic posted anywhere else? I sure hope so, and I hope it's getting tons of reviews, because I'm in shock at the small number it's received here! So far this fic has made me cry, spout a few select words at my monitor, groan in frustration, speculate, and even laugh. Those near-misses between Duo and Heero were driving me nuts; thank-you for not dragging it out too long. Their reunion was so bittersweet. I really like Nora. It seems that she's had a very hard life. Based on her comment to herself, does she think that Heero is Hikari? That would be a fascinating twist. Loved the end of Chapter 3 - can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: InsidiousTofu On: February 20, 2004 23:07 CST
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wow...that was beyond uber awesome i am most impressed and in awe
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Reviewed By: Fin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I'm soooo glad that they're finally together *cheers like mad* you know, slowly but surely I don't know what to write you anymore, expect that your story's just great and that I love it! So keep up the great work, cu Fin-Phoenix
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: oddone88 On: February 14, 2004 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is refreshing to fianlly read a fanfic that has more than just lemons and angst. can't wait for more
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Title: love your story
Reviewed By: Fin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooo glad that you've updated this story! I just love it! So poor Heero finally found a life, huh? Good for him ^^ I just hope he'll 'find' Dou soon, too! Anyway, keep up the great work, cu Fin-Phoenix
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Reviewed By: blizzardangel1 On: February 12, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!! I was so happy you updated and I loved every moment in the fic. it was wonderful and I hope you continue soon. Can never have too much of one great story, yaknow? lol, love it all. Please continue on!
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