| "One Too Many Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: please update!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kaibafan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 06:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty intresting so far. I'll review after there is more. So update soon
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLz UPDATE ASAP K this is reaally REALLy goood ok PLz KEEP IT UP PLLLLLLzzzzzzz
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for the update. Want to see how Sesshoumaru handles Inuyasha, and when you bring Sesshoumaru and Kagome together. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I like the creativity of the story... but I think you should overlook your fic again and check for errors... heh. The story is simple yet hard to follow... ^^;; Well, the thing is that, ahem... I got the feeling that Sesshomaru was, you know... attracted to Kagome *cough, cough* ^^ That's okay though... hee. I think your fic is a bit bland though... Try putting more substance in it like details and thoughts of the characters... especially Kagome. At this point, she doesn't really like Inuyasha... heh. But somehow, I don't think that Kagome would rush to just anybody for comfort... In my opinion, seeing Sesshomaru would just make it worse... that's just what I think though!!! But this is your fic so... heh... I'm not in position to tell you what to do ^^ Oh gosh, I'm running long again -_-;; Be sure to update!
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