| "Shuichi, You Pervert / Shuichi, Anata Wa HENTAI!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Pinetree On: June 13, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic starts out really good but I think it could have a better ending. Just shave off the last five paragraphs and you are golden. *_~
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Title: tis the author
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI (Otaku Hoshi) On: March 22, 2004 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah, I did repost it ^_^ Thank you for reviewing, sango 16! ^_^ ********Otaku~Hoshi
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: sango 16 On: March 22, 2004 20:40 CST
Comment/Review:
yay i am the first reviewer. That was a cute little story i liked it. It seems like ive read this before did you repost or something. It's probably just my imagination. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. Buh-Bye
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