| "Knives" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: k9gmilly On: June 23, 2005 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it is kinda like sesshomaru and rin. But what i don get is that its Knives, A little {girl} and its NC-17 think about what im trying to say. Oh yeah i think knives would have been a little hard on her.
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Reviewed By: EbilJo (nli) On: August 13, 2004 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yep, so this sounds like it has GREAT potential. A couple of things, though: The text kinda annoyed me. Dunno why. Also, some of your sentances could have been combined to make them less choppy. It'll make the story flow better. Overall, it's a great idea and story so far. Please, UPDATE!! I'll gib ya a cookie an' some ice cream if ya do! Come on! Who can resist ice cream? An' cookies?
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Reviewed By: Insane Dragoness (FF.Net) On: April 24, 2004 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Coolness! Kinda like Sessy & Rin, eh? I likes so far, plz write more!
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Reviewed By: Sock On: April 10, 2004 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 12, 2004 03:50 CST
Comment/Review:
the prolouge is great... please update ASAP... IM A KNIVES FAN SO PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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