| "A Lady's Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL THAT WAS FUNNY.
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! I think that you have a good idea going here, you could realy take this somewhere. What I really liked is that when you used a japanese word or term you explained what it ment and how it was used. I know how to speak japanese so have no problem reading fics that have some or evenup to half of the words in japanese, however some writers do not see the need to have a japanese/english translashion of any sort and I feel that is disrespectful to the readers. The writers need to remember that this is America not Japan and as such not all of us are graced with the ability to speak a forign language. Aregato gozaimas for both the story and your time. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to report but your prologue is screwed up...I sugest u change the format or font....
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