| "Yume" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Simon Erif [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapters. This is nearly something that I've been imagining about how Hikaru would end up telling Akira about Sai... nearly.. but still very different. So please. I beg you update more chapters! /cry [Sai style]
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story very much!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: tagg On: July 22, 2005 11:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
lease finish it! onegai. it has been exelent so far.
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Reviewed By: jt On: February 11, 2005 03:44 CST
Comment/Review:
it looks like it's starting to get interesting!
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Title: Random Lurker
Reviewed By: FantismalSpider On: January 15, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable, chapters seem a bit short... but that's all. Are you ever planning on updating this again? Please?
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl On: December 02, 2004 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH dont leave me hangin its good ^_^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: jessi 4612 On: October 23, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, how long has it been since you've updated? Your story is really good! please update.
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Reviewed By: RedFox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very enjoyable fiction. I've read it (the manga) from shonen jump, and even though its not finished, this doesn't give away the finer points of the story. I like it, and I hope you update! Later, RedFox
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Hartia On: June 30, 2004 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley love where this is going! ^^ I cant wait untill you have the next chapters up! hurry hurry hurry!
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Reviewed By: Kaede-chan On: April 26, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, don't think that people aren't reading your fanfics if you don't have too many reviews, a lot of people just don't leave reviews. Please continue writing! This story looks really promising. Although longer chapters would be nice too. Also, if you want to get more readers, try submitting it to fanfiction.net too.
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Reviewed By: stray [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 05:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, write more.
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Reviewed By: HnG Fan On: April 12, 2004 22:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, ooh, Hikaru/Akira! Why'd Sai leave? Keep it comin'...
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice story, the part where Hikaru was whining about Sai. So dramatic. Well anyways, great story, write the next Chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Ayumi192 On: February 14, 2004 16:28 CST
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Great fic, keep on going!
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