| "Stressfull Day's" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Title: cool stuff
Reviewed By: write more (not logged in) On: April 28, 2004 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE PLEASE! its great! i love the story its awesome. why did inutaisho have to be so mean?! kag haveing kids at 18?! wow but cool
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Title: Spectre97
Reviewed By: Spectre97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well "dog dude" your grammar really blows. What you did was not a flame but it was a down right insult. A flame is something the writer can use. You just need to pull your head out of your ass man. And don't try to puff up to me puppy,get a life and don't come back.
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Reviewed By: dog dude On: April 25, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur spelling really really really really bbbblllooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh ya kagomes freind yuki is spelt yuki not yukai
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Title: YAYYYY!!!!!
Reviewed By: Caliko (not signed in) On: April 24, 2004 23:14 CDT
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ABOUT TIME!!!! LOL.. anyway, Glad to see you hung in there! Good turn with the story, btw. InuYasha HAD to have some really harsh feelings somewhere about his father showing up out of the blue. Dad suddenly acting like a father was sure to bring SOMETHING out in the open! ~Caliko
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Title: korisovra@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Korisovra Ti'Kildust On: April 22, 2004 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pairings and the overall storyline are great. Imaginitive, different, and workable. But start using Microsoft Word or something, please. Or a spell and grammar check. Anything lol I'm not being mean or anything because, hell, even though it's really really bad with the grammar and spelling it's still good enough for me to read. (Very rare, most of the time if a fic isn't nearly perfect I stop there and refuse to read any further.)I've seen worse since ff.net went kiddieland on all of us anyways lol
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 21, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay way to stand up! woo, don't let him take shit from anyone! UPDATE PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 13:40 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: animechik89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel ur pain about the aol crisis. lol its a merical i can actualy get online these days. well good luck with the writers block!! Keep it up!!!!! ^_____^ ~animechik89
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Title: caliko
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok.. i have NO ideas.. but this is what I want you to do... 1) Grab a piece of paper and go into a quiet room with no distractions. 2)write down how you want the story to end, then jot down what NEEDS to happen for it to end like that (realistically, not half-assed or rushed) 3)imagine the last chappie in your head, like your watching a movie 4)Try to let it go on, past the point you left off 5)WRITE IT DOWN QUICKLY - not detailed paragraphs, just the main idea of what happens 6) do it again, this time ending where #4 leaves off, repeat #5, ect. ect. Once you have a basic idea of what has to happen in the next chappie, you can begin with a rough draft of paragraphs.. flesh it out, add dialouge and description, maybe some comic relief to help you relax a bit. I'm sorry i couldn't give you any ideas.. i'm basically going through the same thing on my fic. have the beg. and the end of chapter 5 done, but the middle is empty. ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: March 25, 2004 22:02 CST
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I'm still enjoying your story, and look forward to your next update, which I can only hope will be soon. To answer Skiddy16's question, a beta reader is someone who reads the story/chapter before it is posted, to check for typos and to make sure the events don't conflict with what has already happened in the story.
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Reviewed By: Skiddy16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 15:57 CST
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yur story is funni. very original. update soon.(yah it was getting kinda annoying with the evan thing) and wat the hell is a beta reader and everyone keeps telling me that they have there own beta reader and im like wtf is a beta reader?(man i ramble way too much in reviewd)
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Title: Caliko
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 16:10 CST
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/snicker/ I torture my son (Anthony) and you think i'm COOL? waHAHAHAH... wanna be adopted? lol.. i have plenty of energy to torture 2... anywho, have patience.. this too shall pass as the saying goes. Just email me when you update (tho i'll be without internet for the next 10 days or so.. **sob**) ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 11, 2004 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
cool
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 08, 2004 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
thanks for the warning spector
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: March 08, 2004 16:42 CST
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i meant that in a good way though.
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