| "Stressfull Day's" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elkian [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2009 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely like it, but may I suggest you re-read after you finish?Sorry, it just looks rushed in some places. Sidenote: thank you for reteaching me the merit of not eating while I read...honest to God I nearly choked, laughing XD
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 23:35 CDT
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You know what, to hell with it. I'm giving up on this fic. Kagura was present, which counteracted the homonyms. She was free and living with Sesshomaru, so I let slide the atrocious grammar. She was "in heat" and Sesshomaru was having thoughts potent enough to make Mushin blush, so I generously overlooked the spelling (oh, God, the spelling!). Then you threw in that thing with Inuyasha's twin sister. That's where I draw the line. Goodbye forever.
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 22:35 CDT
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This is ridiculous. Do you not know how to use the backspace button or something? And if you're going to use Japanese words that could easily be replaced with English ones and still be comprehensible, at least spell them right: hakamas, H-A-K-A-M-A-S, hakamas! If I didn't love the story (and Sess/Kagura) so much, I'd drop this faster than you could say "No, please! Don't go!"
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 21:46 CDT
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Alright, I'm halfway through the first chapter, and I gotta say, your awesomeness dropped by 50%. The story in itself is pretty good, but your conventions really need work. Run-on sentences, missed punctuation, egregious grammar errors, and homonym confusion aboud. Nice plot and premise, but I would reccomend getting a beta reader for future fics; the most creative of us aren't often those that excell at English.
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 21:32 CDT
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OK, I haven't even read anything besides the description, and I already know I am going to love this. It's complete, the overview alone promises hilarity, and you paired Kagura with the right person. I swear, some of those perverts out there are putting her with Koga, Naraku, Kanna, Ayame. . . the thought of it nauseates me. Oh, well; you're awesome.
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Title: I liked this but...
Reviewed By: Astro dude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 02:34 CST
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There were far too many grammar mistakes. Far too many. Ever heard of a spell checker? Anyway. It was good, *Mutters to self* (be better though if there weren't so many grammar mistakes...) XD
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!! please continue it... pretty please!!!T_T... -_- anyway, I hope u update 'cause I'm eager to find out whats gonna happen...
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 16:22 CDT
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grr this is such an AWSOME story, possibly one of the best ive read yet and its not completed! grr PLEASE UPDATE! i gotta know what happens next!
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Title: too lazy to log in
Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: January 18, 2005 00:28 CST
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May I humbly suggest that perhaps you should email the stories from your home computer to a web mail address? Yahoo! and Hot Mail are free web mail services that you can use for this. I would really love to see this story updated, and hope that all is going well for you. -ArcaneFire
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Title: Stressfull Day's
Reviewed By: Inu Baby 18` On: October 10, 2004 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the Statement at the begining of this chapter is wrong The type of pants they wear called a HAMAKA
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Reviewed By: beth tigeress On: October 09, 2004 15:33 CDT
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daaa! that sucks! i know how that goess, my computer was on the friz when i was writing a story for fan fic.net and i kept loosing it. i hope you get your com fixed soon 'cause i can wait to read the next set of chapters. you're really a good author, by the way.
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper On: October 08, 2004 10:46 CDT
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Very interesting story, I hope you write more soon
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Reviewed By: Almighty Weird One [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 17:16 CDT
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THIS IS KALIKA142!! THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY!!! I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sorry to all you folks out there who are waiting SO patiantly for the next chapter (AND YES THERE IS ONE!!) but i uh...hehe...kindaforgotmypasswordandhadtomakeanewsn!! I will try to make the best that i can while i'm on the internet (because now my only internet sours is SCHOOL!!) I've even got a few more fan fics on the way! Just be pactiant and not kill me and you'll get yoru fics!
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Reviewed By: stacy On: July 24, 2004 18:38 CDT
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update already please!!! i cant take it anymore!
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 20:24 CDT
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wow its great! i love the story its awesome. please update soon the hell with the spelling mistakes as long as its readable.
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