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| "Kasume The Ninja Swordsman" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Okay!!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lets see. How about a female, and she's an archer. ^^ I like archers,(especially after Lord Of the Rings). How about she has blond hair and greenish eyes. How's that? Why? Um, cuz? Okay, she can be a possible love interest, or somethin'. -_-' Well, you don't have to use her or anything. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter! More personality. ^^ Other characters? Well, it's your book, so, er. I dunno. But it was really good. Why did Araki gasp? I'm dieing to know!!!!!! Also, great names! ^^ Upload the next chapter soon! P-L-E-A-S-E! Please!
| Title: masterpiece
Reviewed By: invaderkenny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story, you have the true markings of a great writer. Keep up the good work. Invaderkenny signing off
| Title: That was strange. . . . .
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was kind of choppy, but otherwise then that it was pretty good. It could use a few touch ups, but nothing more. You explained everything really well, but some of the paragraphs were in clumps. I look foward to the next chapter. . . . . O.O That review sounds business like. . . . Heh, heh, heh. Well, upload the next chapter soon!
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