| "Noble House" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: baitdcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! too bad this hasn't been updated in awhile!
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Title: Simply please
Reviewed By: Fully enjoyed it On: May 15, 2005 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read this story yesterday and thought it was great. Too bad it doesn't seem as though you're writing it anymore. Definitely a shame, you had such an original thought going and now it's only half done. Oh well, we don't always get what we want. Hope you get back to enjoying writing someday.
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Reviewed By: Winged heart On: September 15, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Princess Timbrel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the story though you could stand to work on capitalization and breaking up your paragraphs so they don't look all blocky and it won't take so much time to separate dialogue and descriptions.
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 03:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Reviewed By: N.S. On: May 27, 2004 00:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Somebody should seriously consider creating some way to punish authors for making cliffies. Update, update!
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Reviewed By: coconnor On: April 18, 2004 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are uou going to update
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Reviewed By: Yumi01 On: March 13, 2004 01:27 CST
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*starts to shake* NOOOOO~! i have looked fricken everywhere for an even remotely Inu/San pairing *evey narrow* you are truly evil . . . like the cliffy!it was just getting to the part~! *bambi eyes and flower backround* pwease update.
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh! That was an evil cliffy >:( . . . But, anyway, this is one of the most original fics I've ever read. It's so angsty and true to character . . . Everybody just has so many unfortunate past things hanging over their heads . . . I feel genuinely bad for everyone in this story--InuYasha, Kagome, Sango, even Sesshomaru. And, speaking of which, when are we going to see more of the Lord of the Western Lands? I know it's going to take him a couple of weeks to completely heal his hand, but how about a little something from his POV before he tries to take Sango again? Please? ^__^ . . . And Sango and Inu getting closer? . . . hmmmm . . . I'm sure nothing good will come of this, but it will make for good reading :D . . . And, yeah, the formatting's off in some of the chapters, cutting off words on the left hand side of the page, but it's usually just one word and it's pretty easy to figure out what it is . . . Anyway, GREAT story and update as soon as humanly possible--theMaven :)
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Reviewed By: KombatWolf On: February 28, 2004 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is very well written; however, it needs some work on the spelling and grammar. Overall it is one of the better InuYasha fanfics I have read.
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Reviewed By: youkaitsuki On: February 26, 2004 14:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I see we have formatting issues over here, lol
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Reviewed By: inu-babe06 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! How does Inu Yasha feel about Sango? Is there going to be anything between them? I was kind of hoping that Sesshy would actually take the responsabilitys of his actions and learn to love Sango. :) Keep Writing!!!
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Reviewed By: Sock On: February 24, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: inu-babe06 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ms. Bloom On: February 19, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and write more!! I really like the story and have been checking on it for days and you still haven't written more!! Don't leave me hanging! But, i really like it and you are doing an overall good job! Keep it up!
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