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| "The Pleasures of Mirrors" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: dark_heart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARE YOU KIDDING!?!?! Okay, a one shot is all very well and nice, but you could have a whole Roemeo/Juliet thing going!!! I'm horrible at romances (no offense if you have a y chromosone, but I tend to avoid guys, they're mostly jerks, so I have little material to work with here) and I will not stand by and let you ruin a perfectly excellent wonderful fanfic by deciding to leave out a point!!! I loved your Sesshoumaru's General thing, but honestly@! the end was so weak, I expected a huge climatic ending, with Hiei and Yuske and Kuwabara bursting in at the last minute, and K & S exscaping together, and losts of plot and action and plot! Having a fanfic that good and then dropping it with a crummy ending like that jsut doesn't make sense!!!!!!! Look, I respect your style and your writing and you, but this is your best story yet, even better than the general one (okay, maybe as good) and it doesn't make sense to do that!!!! Please give a huge plot, lots of drama and romance and action and blah blah blah gooey romance! P.S.- I can't believe I wrote a review this long... geez.... P.S.S.- if I think of anything else, I'll tell you.
| Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo awsome. This pairing rocks monkey socks. The way you write it,it just flows to me. Very cool,keep it up.
| Reviewed By: BLK Angel of Destruction On: December 09, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! This is cool! Update soon!
| Title: T_T love you
Reviewed By: Carinito [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T I can't believe it I finally found a reason to live. To find out what happens next will keep me alive. I just love Shuichi and Youko fics, but I just can't find enough. Please Update...I hate to bother you but...can you read my fic 'Two Different Lives'. I'm just really desperate to get a review, if you ever bother to read it just tell me the truth. Anyway enough of my pitiful pleas, I'm going back to praising you (bows on floor). Really love your other fic too 'Kurama, Sesshoumaru's General!' Just love it ^_^ waiting for that one to...what will I do while in waiting. I know read your other fics @_@ Sorry if I wasted yor time He He.
| Reviewed By: rebekah On: September 02, 2004 08:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
| Reviewed By: kitty mama On: August 18, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall is way pass a 10 I LOVE this fic T_T PLEASE PLEASE have the action, the love,and the plot. Make it a long one please.
| Reviewed By: Kris_Pat16 On: March 16, 2004 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: February 19, 2004 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lot, action, love, plot, action,love plot,action,love,plot,action,love,plot,action,loveplot,action,love,plot,act ion,love,plot,action,loveplot,action,love,plot,action,love. PLEASE P.S. PLOT, ACTION, AND LOTS OF LOVE!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Mistress of the Sword [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You made a story that centers around Shuichi and Youko, and one that makes it believeable. I could kiss you for that... except I don't beleive in PDAs ^_^ At any rate, I would go with a plotless love story, but only because you'd have to make needless complications or something to get it to be an action type thing. You could of course make it plotful romance... hm. Anywhoo, keep writing! I'm just dying to see where you're going with this. ~Mistress
| Reviewed By: deaths angel On: February 15, 2004 06:29 CST
Comment/Review:
yes you should make it a plotless love fic.
| Reviewed By: Watershed On: February 14, 2004 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to say that 75+125+15=215 and 500-215=285. Sorry I'm a perfectionist and I love math. I think this is a very creative idea. Are you going to finish it? I think it would be cool to have plot and everything, but you could just make it a one-shot. Whatever you think you will have the time to finish. If you think you can see it through to the end with a plot and action and everything else that enatils, then do that. Just don't start something you can't finish because its really annoying to get into a stary and then the author just drops it and it stays incomplete. That was long. Good job and i'll check in to see what you decide.
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