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| "Broken Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Youko_love On: August 28, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its great so far! I was also really happy there were no typos, authors who don't use spell checker is a petpev of mine, so you got a 10 there. This is such a unique storyline so far, I'm going to enjoy the rest of it I just know it! Please update soon, I don't mind short chapters. Are there going to be any pairings? Please have lots of Eyes appearances. :P
| Reviewed By: Giraffe On: August 06, 2005 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got no flames so your marshmallows will have to remain unroasted, and no criticism(not that helpful I know) but it was great! A little short, I hope you make your next one longer. Nice job with the title of the CD by the way.
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