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Reviewed By: Kitta0 (the writer) On: February 13, 2004 16:06 CST
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I have one now where are the other two reviews!?!?! I have half of the next chapter done, but I'm not updating till i get at least 5 reviews from other people and when i mean other people i mean people that haven't written one yet.
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Reviewed By: Yuki1000(Too lazy to log in) On: February 12, 2004 19:27 CST
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That sooooo sad she lost everything she held that is just sad
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Reviewed By: BP On: February 11, 2004 19:59 CST
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THANK YOU FOR READING MY STORY!!!! It'll be updated by 9:00 central.
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Reviewed By: BP On: February 11, 2004 18:19 CST
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Hi! Your story is really good. There are a few spelling errors though.I can't wait till you make the next chapter. If you have any free time on your hands check out my fic. It's called "Others like me" by BlackPanther. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 17:00 CST
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To Princess of Neptune, it hopefuly will have the YYH charates in it, but right now its about my friends and mine OCs. They wanted me to one for them. *sigh* Why do i have to be so nice. Any way i try to make it none confuseing. But if you think that it is confussing read What Happens Next. And I really now my spelling stinks. I can think I have found all the spelling mastaks, give it to a friend and they will find over 20 mestaks in it. Like today. My friend Keo was reading it (the next chapter to this one) and he found over 20. I just serasly stink at spelling. And if you think you are confused, I even get confussed some times, but it dose help to go back and see what you read. And I do have alot of diffrent point of views. In this fic. I'm trying to keep around only two to three point of views. I just like to show everyone's point of view. I think I have writen enof and if any of you want to talk to me just emial me at robtia@bellsouth.net Bye!
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Reviewed By: Princess of Neptune On: February 11, 2004 15:46 CST
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It's really good. The only problem is your spelling and grammer. IT was a little confusing with that. Also, I thought it was a Yu-Yu-Hakusho fanfic but you have none of the characters in it. I guess that means it certainly is a very original fanfic and I do like it
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