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Title: hey girl
Reviewed By: the real pheonox On: February 12, 2005 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: GOOD JOB! *chappies 1-8*
Reviewed By: DG32173 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
better grammer and spelling! now try it for the others! use microsoft word 2000, it has a spell-check thingie! and it shows you proper spelling for whatever you're trying to spell. if not, then BUY A DAMN DICTIONARY! or in your case, three different dictionaries! well, i'm adding ya to my favorites! i have about twenty-something favorite authors! ja ne!
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Title: I LOVE THIS FIC
Reviewed By: Madd Dogg 21590 On: March 14, 2004 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic rocks, and believe it or not, I've seen much worse spelling than yours on this page. If the other authors bothered to check their spelling, I would like their fics a whole lot better. Now, as for the title, I was thinking that you might like to name the group after the mother, you know, her first name if you thought of one for her.
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 16:23 CST
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People if i don't get a stupid name how am i going to write the next chapter????????? So if you want the next chapter you better tell me any ideas, and also do you like Kittira? HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 (to lazy to sign in) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 19:44 CST
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Mehi do you have an emial. AND I KNOW I CAN'T SPELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS A CURSE!!!!!! I SWEAR IT IS, I NEVER COULD SPELL, well i can spell the three letter words, but that's about all. one time i acuttaly spelled this big long word right, it was amazing! Six people here say I need to work on my spelling, all my friends (10), and my family. (By the why Re-a is my cuz) So counting my family i have well over 20 people that have told me i can't spell. YOU DON'T HAVE TO TELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Mehi On: February 26, 2004 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Kitta Just a fact but you need to work on spelling and on overall rating I gave you a 10 cause you're my friennd(hee hee hee) Come on girl. You know I'm joking. You deserve a 10. Anyhow work on you're spelling.
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 19:32 CST
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Gues what people I'm getting my grandmother (who is a college english teacher to proofread my story, but I don't know when she will have time. And I have the next two chapters and the half of another writen. So when I get my reviews I will update. I need one more!!! And to Jin-eh, Keo is one of my friends OCs and he was kind based on Hiei, but I made them a little difrent, and he has silver hair, that's was my friend choce. And to everyone else THANKS FOR THE REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!! And if your reading this and you haven't review do so, so I can update!!!
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Reviewed By: kaori sasuke On: February 24, 2004 16:56 CST
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love the plot, its grand. and I'm very sorry but your spelling does need a bit of work.
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Reviewed By: jin-eh On: February 23, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that your spelling could be a little better, but i did read your complaint and that bout of screaming that you went on so im sorry about that... but i like your stories a lot and i think that keo is my favorite:)...is he kinda like a hiei with brown hair?
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Reviewed By: BP On: February 20, 2004 18:03 CST
Comment/Review:
It was very good! Please advertise me. Pwease! I have only ten reviews! * sobbs*
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Reviewed By: BP On: February 17, 2004 12:28 CST
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That was the best ever! Keep on going!
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Reviewed By: re-a On: February 16, 2004 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
hello cuz work on your spelling pleaze i loved it......... pleaz update.......
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Reviewed By: BP On: February 15, 2004 21:06 CST
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Hey! I read your 3rd chapter it's cool! Please consider this a review. I want to know what happens next! I went on this site and someone has thier fic named Iris! I'm so mad! I maen I feel betrayed or something. Keep up the good work! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kitta0 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 18:38 CST
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I AM NOT UPDATING TILL I GET ONE, PEOPLE THAT IS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I MEAN IT AND I WILL TAKE THE STORY OFF IF I DON'T GET IT SOON. (For some reson i haven't been in a good mood latly. *sigh* Blame it on my friend Pheonox. She just pissed me of and i just i shouldn't be taking in off on you people, but I'm just mad. And i do stike to my word I will take it of. And if i do you will have to go to one of my other stories or emil and ask me to put it back on.) SO REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 14, 2004 11:53 CST
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I love the story, PLEASE UPDATE
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