| "I'm Not Alone Anymore" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how about you bring in more characters. like instead of going nutso gaara runs away and finds himself in konoha. or kimmimaro,instead of being found by orochimaru runs away?
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: ACOTCT [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story please update when you get the time 7/10.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
make more
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Reviewed By: ceruleanblade On: January 19, 2006 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaawwwwwww! i never thought of this coupling before, this fic is so adorable! i love the wayyou wrote this. plz update soon, this fic is really interseting! hmmmm... is there gonna be yaoi or shonen-ai in this? anyways great job on this fic, ~ceruleanblade~
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 04:04 CST
Comment/Review:
coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Maleficus-lupus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what the first thing I though on seeing your name was? how to tranlate it, it translates like so:Tenshi-Itachi-onna. just like to tell you that. please update soon I really like it.
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Reviewed By: WookieeBeta On: October 07, 2004 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
*taps Binder of Angel-Doom silently*
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Reviewed By: Crazy ^o^ On: May 26, 2004 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohh, this is soooo cute. Please hurry up with the next chapter.
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Title: pleas write!!!!!
Reviewed By: rachel-can On: May 23, 2004 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas wrrite more,I'm really intested!
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! You rock this is so cool!^________________________^
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So kewl! Is Haku going to go to the same academy as Naruto and make alot of trouble? Don't leave me hanging like this!!!!!!!
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Title: godspeed
Reviewed By: miako On: March 01, 2004 01:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic has a lot of potential. I bet you alot of authors were busy kicking themeselves when they got a look at your idea. So come on! Don't leave me hanging...add another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Distant Stars On: February 27, 2004 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... That's original. *suddenly cheerful* I like it! It's so cute... I always thought they should have been friends... But I think Haku would be a little more... well, thoughtful, maybe contemplative. I mean, think about it. His first words to Zabuza are... "I see my reflection in your eyes." Or was it, you are like me? Well, something like that. Normal, cheerful kids don't say that. But Haku is really into the more philosophical things. "Precious people" and all. But it's so cute! :3! Please keep writing! PS: Are other characters going to be involved? I dunno, since you're collecting tortured kids, should Sasuke join their little circle? Goodness knows, he needs it. But, hey, not like I'd complain either way. PPS: Maybe you could use longer paragraphs though. All the blank lines get annoying after a while.
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