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| "Honest Nothing" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: fans self...whoa On: October 22, 2004 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahaha! Thats what im talking about baby. Loves it all, now....where's the next chapter?
| Title: mwhahaha! I'm reviewing as YOU!
Reviewed By: inca_dove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so um, ya. I got off my lazy ass and decided to review your chapter. *giggles* as "you" no less. As you already know, this chapter is really good, I loved the ending well, okay, the ending made me cry, but hey, it was still good. Messa is so bad, the little part with Okita thinking about Aiko as a "sex slave" e hehehe! Lots and lots of wicked ideas came to mind then... Lemonaide, please, I'm begging of you! Again wonderful chappy and I can't wait for the next one, erm...that is when I get to read it. And who knows that answer when it comes to my predictament at home...*glares at husband* @*^&@^&!!! Anyhow, good work, can't wait for more and for the love of GOD, make it soon...*evil grin* you! A.K.A. Lillithan
| Title: .... find comfort in Okita's goodness
Reviewed By: ione_girl On: June 25, 2004 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
... LOL soooo judging by the little teaser of next chapter something juicy might happen. SQUEEEE! Jumps up and down I soooooo cannot wait for the next chap. Wait... that's just wrong, i'm waiting for my sisters next chap and not working on my own. DAMN IT! Ah well, i liked the part with Aiko finally realizing that Kondo was her father. It was kind of touching. Really. But for a cliffy you should've had Takara running through the forest at night saying something. What i do not know. BAKA SESSHA
| Title: squee?
Reviewed By: Venora Strikes Again [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so (in this, at least) okita doesn't have tuberculosis... okay, that makes WAY more sense!!! but wait- if aiko's father is kndo, then what about takara? are they even related?! everything i know has been lost! don't worry; not your fault- im easily confused!!! ^.^;
| Reviewed By: Venora Strikes Again [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya... i think i may have read that one on fanfiction.net... i may have... it sounds so familiar... anywho, im hungry and PMSing, and now i feel so much better ^_^
| Reviewed By: Venora Strikes Again [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awesome! school is a killer, but that's why the human soul created procrastination. i hope you can continue this soon! there aren't enough okita stories out there...
| Title: Tee hee he!
Reviewed By: MysticInca On: April 07, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::Glomps Saitou:: Hello, hello! I really liked this chapter, I don't really know why though. ::Saitou raises eyebrow:: But you did such a wonderful job combining all of the humor and the waffiness together. It mushed well! And I can't wait for the next chapter! I would like an extra large glass of lemonaide please. ::grins coyly in Saitou's direction:: Mwahaha..ha..*cough, cough* So yeah, good work. Waiting for next chapter! Mystic
| Title: sure....
Reviewed By: mysticinca On: March 08, 2004 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, of course you would enjoy writing a chapter that was filled with nothing but death and gore and confusion!!! That's okay though, we love you anyway! ^.^ I actually did enjoy this chapter. The description you used was just awesome, i could totally see what was happening. I understand why you had to hurt Okaita....::shakes broom at dirty hentai thoughts "BACK, STAY BACK! YOU HEAR!! BACK!:: All in all, another wonderful chapter and I'm eagerly awaiting the next one! btw...the next chapter for truths tears should be up in a week.... ^.^; bout time too huh! lill aka: mysticinca
| Title: right.....
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 03:42 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gave ya a 9 on spelling cause of a type-o. you spelled work, instead of word....hehe Once again another wonderful chapter..only problem was it WAS TOO SHORT! I realy like the expression you gave Okita at the end...one of those, "Hello, my name is, have you seen my bedroom before?" hehe Can't wait to see what you have instore for the rest of the story...actually i'm rather impatient about that. Hurry up and upload!! Oh, and your welcome for the neice...want the nephew? I'll give him to ya for free...come on! Mystic aka Lillithan
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