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| "Takahashi High" Reviews/Comments [ 585 ] | | Pages (39): [ « ‹ 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 › » ] | Reviewed By: Mimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I don't mind if you choose to only have MM members review, because I have this lovely account, and any excuse to force me to log in is appreciated...but I know how you feel about the flamer...just ignore them and smirk over how they're boosting your review count? ^^;; Anyway...CLIFFHANGERS! EEEEEEEEVIIIIIL. But I'm still floating over the Mile High thing, so you're safe...from me, anyway. *cough* I can't wait to see what happens~!! *bounces around*
| Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To explain my ratings; I put 7 for writning style because sometimes I get confused when the scene changes and you haven't serperated them so I get all messed up. Spelling and grammar is not too good, like having the wrong 'to' 'too' 'two' in places and leaving out words, but I have grammar probs too. 8 for originality because as you stated in your summery, everybody's doing the high school thing, I even did it but yours is good so 8. 9 seemed right because I enjoyed it alot, you made me laugh and nearly started crying with the fight that happened with Inu and Kag, but there have been storied that HAVE made me cry and your not on that high emotional level yet, but neither I'm I so don't feel bad. Overall rating 9 keep up the good work! Well I'm finally caught up and I have to say that that I like your story very much, but how about not putting 'They rode the wave of pleasure' at the end of every lemon (please don't get mad, it was at the end of almost every lemon) But I feel bad for Kagome having to worry so much over not knowing if shes pregnant. I hope she isn't, and starts taking the pill. And poor Rin has to break it to her clueless father that she is getting married and can't go off to who knows where with him, I think she should start living with Sesshoumaru now, because her dad is a real jerk. Thats pretty much all I have to say, I hope you update soon and remember it's 'asshole' ^_^
| Reviewed By: Midnite Wolf On: April 11, 2004 11:12 CDT
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To: ~*Ayumi*~ Em *koff* kofff* im tha 1 under Mimiko...i is not a flamer....;_;
| Reviewed By: SerenityVadaRain On: April 10, 2004 17:44 CDT
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Oh my goodness! This is the BEST story! You and AngelBabe are tied! you and her are the best writers on here! Congratulations! But one problem..HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY! :)I'm so bored..I've checked to see if you updated like every ten minutes..but sadly you have not. Well hurry and good job! xoxo*Serenity Vada Rain Hope*
| Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 13:02 CDT
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Just to let you know, you will be getting reviews from me through this whole thing!!!!! Can't help it, I'm annoying. The only thing that I see wrong is the spelling of asshole, you spell it asswhole, that would be talking about all of the person's butt, but I have you are talking about the stinky place so it's asshole.
| Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 10:57 CDT
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I haven't read all of the story yet, but I just had to tell you...I LOVE DAVE THE BARBARIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And why'ja haffta go and bring Kikyou into this???????
| Title: It's not so long this time!
Reviewed By: ~*Ayumi*~ On: April 10, 2004 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit! I wrote a review, but then my computer froze so I have to write it again, here goes: Ahem. Whaaaat. Rin's father is a bi-otch. (And then, some complaing, and then:)Err, wouldn't anyone be wondering where Sango and Miroku have been? I mean, no one spends that much time in the bathroom, just using the bathroom. Well, anyway. U speak Punjabi? I speak some, but I mostly write it. (I write Hindi, Bengali, and Gujarati, too. They, in most cases, look alike so it's easy to learn.) Oh yeah, what happened to Sango's dad? Where'd he go? *looks around* Don't forget about hiiiiim! Don't worry about those flamers. Yea, it's fun to make fun of them, but all they're looking for is attention and a way to piss people off. They don't have to read the story if they don't like it.Ok, well, I'm going to make some Ramen. . . or something. . .at 9:35 in the morning (?). Alright, well I'm out. TaTa! ~*Ayumi*~ P.S Err, I guess you deleted that first flame, because at first I was like 'what flame?', but there's still more,like the one *under Mimiko*. Just letting you know. . .
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Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 08:49 CDT
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I can't remember if I've ever reviewed before but I've been with this story since you posted chapter one and I love it. I just wish MM would've done the favorite notification thing and I hadn't missed the last few chapters til now. Anyway, I intend to see this story through til the end which I hope is a good ways away yet. Call me greedy. I do have one miniscule nit-pick though. Any chance you could put a bar or some sort of divider between your review responses and the beginning of the story? I kinda miss a few paragraphs sometimes til I go back. I'm lazy I guess. ^^
| Title: Oh Crap!
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin's father all of a sudden wants to BE a father and what's he going to do when he finds out Sess and Rin are engaged? And what about Kagome and Inuyasha? Are they pregnant or is she just having some really weird pre-cramps? I haven't been getting my updates from mediaminer :(( so here is my e-mail address so you can let me know when you update *cheers* savsirishprincess@yahoo.com ^_^ Sara-sama
| Reviewed By: Mimiko! On: April 09, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I have my own serious issues with fathers...but Rin's...I hate him. I'd like to roast his nuts...while he's still attached...and the feed them to wild boars. Extreme? Maybe...but it'd be a sight to see. XD Yay! Mile-High Club members~! XD You did that for me, right? *sugary-smile* Anyhoo, I'ma bounce off to work on PM M&M...bwahahaaaaaaaa*choke*
| Reviewed By: Midnite Wolf On: April 09, 2004 17:30 CDT
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oh, ya if it makes a feel betta...................................................................... ........................................................................... .................*ONLINE HUG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
| Reviewed By: Midnite Wolf On: April 09, 2004 17:27 CDT
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Lolz, that silly flamer…I really don't think they know how 2 spell lik mi…hehe, from now on, don't make any A/N to them to let them be aware that ur reading and thinking about their flame jus ignore em n pretend that nuttins there heh, they r such POS's lolz newayz aside from that, I won't go round ranting and swearing about them cos they really aren't worth the effort, *rolls eyes* newayz whoeva they r, they suuuure r mature, rofl, rite so ye, doin grate job w/ da fanfic, that las chapter was funnie, I wud expect havin bein cot doin it in public wud turn sum1 like Roku on (srry 2 lazzy to spel ful names) o ya, Mr. Flamer dude, you suck, and there u ave it, most ur reviewers aren't sidin w/ tha flamer (actually no1 is) so, yep, dun lose no sleep ova it, wuts 1 opinion vs 60? Lolz sho yep, keep it up, (wut a loser), urs trulie, Middy PS. feh
| Reviewed By: Chika-Chan On: April 09, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUCK THAT BITCH HE/SHE/IT DON'T EVEN KNO HOW 2 SPELL NEWAY DON'T LISTEN 2 HE/SHE/IT, HE/SHE/IT JUS JEALOUS BECUZ HE CAN'T RIGHT AS GOOD AS U NEWAY AFTER U FINISH READIN MY REVIEW GO 2 MY FIC "WAIT A MINUTE DID U SAY POOL PARTY!?" LOVE CHIKA-CHAN AKA CHININA-CHAN
| Title: EEP!
Reviewed By: Jul-Bug On: April 09, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEP! sry i mean they WOULDNT know a good fic if it smaked them in the face! sawwy sawwy sawwy!! my bad ^.^''
| Reviewed By: Jul-Bug On: April 09, 2004 15:29 CDT
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Whoa...this fic is going in my "best fic ever read" book! ^_^ yay! lol neways great story! your a very good writer, keep up the good work! and ne1 that flames you...well screw them! =P obviusly they would know a good story if it smaked them in the face,lol. well me gatta go. ill be waiting for next chapie ^.^ much luv! xoxo ~Jul-Bug
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