| "Takahashi High" Reviews/Comments [ 585 ] |
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry for reviewing so late!! :( LOL It's okay, I'll forgive you for that little mess up... umm, a beta reader is yeah, just like that you said, someone who reads it over to make sure you haven't shit it out the wrong hole. I dunno how you want to get around to getting one, but your online friends who know good English and stuff may be able to help you out. Anyway, good chapter ^^ Nice work, poor Inuyasha and Kagome :( Write more SOON! Must read more O_O Less Miroku and Sango in this chapter too.
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 00:43 CST
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they broke up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*cries* update soon please! i loved your story so far!
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:47 CST
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BTW, I was reading your other reviews ( Scoffs, as if any were that great ^_~) And I couldn't help but notice that you had flamers. Hmm. They (not naming names) should not be so hateful, they are lucky if you even post the chapter. I want to see them keep up more than one story at a time. (blanches) Stupid witches... I hope you *** die of horrible papercuts!! And lawnmowers!!
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:43 CST
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Hmm. This reminds me of my breakup. But we did get back together... v_v. Temptation is a bitch. Song of the day: If you like to talk to tomatoes, If a squash can make you smile, if you like to waltz with potatoes... up and down the produce isle... oh there will never-ever-ever be another show like.. Veggietales!... oh there will never-ever-ever be another show like.. Veggietales! Veggie-tales, Veggie-tales!! lol. Had to share. I am trully flattered that you look forward to my comments. I think I'm psychic. *scratches head*.... Po-Ta-To!
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Reviewed By: Mimiko! On: March 18, 2004 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you didn't catch my giant teary face? I'll do it again ;___-wait. >> Too tiring. Too sad to. You're mean. ...why am I still enjoying this? ;-;
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Title: I'm addicted!!!
Reviewed By: Gothic Rule (GR) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I'm also sweet lil Maddy)I read the new chapter! ^_^ I almost cried when I read how Inuyasha and Kagome were treating each other... HOW HORRIBLY SAD but your fic is none the less still good!! I'll be keeping an eye for the new chapter! (be warned of further threats if any delays in your updates!) Toodles! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Dreamer On: March 18, 2004 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe ^_^ jus to let u know i was jus kidding so don't fainth or cry now lol
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Dreamer On: March 18, 2004 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! YOU BETTER BRING THEM BACK TOGETHER SOON OR UR GONNA GET IT, HOW? U MIGHT ASK, WELL I KNOW A LOT OF PEOPLE THAT WANTED TO KILL U CUZ YOU MADE KAG SPLIT UP WITH YASH SO U BETTER WATCH IT!!!! SO BRING PUT THEM BACK TOGETHER, AND UPDATE SOON IF U DON'T WANNA DIE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jubilation On: March 18, 2004 09:45 CST
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good chapter. I don't think I would have like it as much if kagome was a big cry baby. I like it when she is tough.
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: March 18, 2004 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BB:This story is SOOOO GOOOOOOD!!! I'm in love! Akia: YEA!!! I love how everying is going on!!! BB: EVERYTHING!!!*glares* Did you even finish reading it? Akia: *looks sheepish* N-no. BB: I thought so! How else would you say you liked Inu and Kag breaking up! Akia: WHAT!!! WHAT KINDA DUMB ASS SLUT WOULD BREAK THEM UP!!!! WHAT KIND OF STUPIDER DUMB ASS SLUT WOULD WANT THEM TO STAY APART!!! Ed: *growls* *pisses on fanfic* Akira: Bad ED BAD!!! BB: *smaks Ed* I LIKE this story! Akia: How could you like a story where inu n kag are not TOGETHER!!! Akira: YEA! Akia: *looks at Akira* *growls* What the hell are you doing here bitch! Akira: I live here dumbass! Akia: Well i've been here longer then you so move out! Akira: Oooo...inuyasha plushy Akia: *attacks* Akira: *bends down* Akia: *hits wall* BB: -_-' man...i think were getting off topic ED:-_-' *growls at BB who still has her chained then at horrible cliffhanger* BB: Man...So i just want you to know that i really like this fic so i hope that you update soon, kay? Akira: *reading reivews* WHAT KINDA STUPID BITCH DOESNT WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER!! I'M GUNNA GET HER!!! BB: You can't you dont know who she is. Akira: I dont care! Akia: *is burning last chapter* Akira+Akia+ED: *dance around flames* BB:-_-'...please don't mind my insane counter parts..Dana ain't here too keep them under controll. *sigh* So i hope you update! Akia: YEA! Akira: YEA! Akia: *growls* DO you always have to follow what i say? Akira: *sticks out toung* Akia: *to Ed* Bit her n i'll give you a taco. Ed: *smile* *bites off toung* Akira: Hahahaha! It was my fake, rubber, poison, gag toung! ED: *puke in corner on last chapter* BB: I think what they are saying is that they dont like inu n kag apart for too long. Akia: *is sarcastic*you think? BB: Just update please. GR: (This saga to be continued... ) hahahahahahahaha !!!!!!!!! ^^ Sammael: BWAHAHAHAHAHA Akira:....does this mean Scratch will show up?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 07:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry and bring them back together already! Please! Please! They are my favourite couple because they are so... different then the rest of them. Miroku and Sango are like all professional yet shy, Rin and Sess know everything about eachother and Kagome and Inuyasha... well they get along pretty well... Inuyashas bad tempers and Kagomes sweet sides sorta mix well. I can't stand them not being together and I hope they get back together soon!
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Reviewed By: fanficluvr On: March 18, 2004 06:59 CST
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great chapter! although it's a little depressing to see yash and kagome separated, it still makes the fic more interesting. hmmmm, i wonder what'll happen next. i looove this fic, of course. update soon. are kag/yash still gonna be fighting once they get back home?
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Reviewed By: Krystal (needs a hobby) On: March 18, 2004 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this was a great chappie, depressing but great. Listening to michelle branch's "i can save you" song just makes it worse. well i can't wait till you update. i decided to use a diff name since i'm never signed in but yeah, can't wait to see what Inu does next. he needs his Kag and she him. *sniffles* i wuv ur story. Miztikal_Dragon
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Title: dale4eva3@aol.com
Reviewed By: sugarglidergirl3 On: March 17, 2004 20:48 CST
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YAY THE ANGST IS BACK!!! don;t get me wrong i love fluff but what is fluff with out angst? hope ya don't brake down and make them get back together right away. and on another note... MONKEY!
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