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"Better Luck Next Time" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 16, 2005 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOT FAIR!! *cries* Will they ever see what he looks like?? I really enjoyed this. Sexy no jutsu is the coolest technique ever. XD I laughed so hard when Kakashi pointed out his faults! Great job!
 Title: This is similar to ep 101
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2004 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE SUPER POWERS! How did your fic come true in the show? Weird! But I loved that episode and I loved your fic! (yes I read it again!) You still get a ten... again, JA NE!!!
 Reviewed By: Anomy Mouse  On: October 05, 2004 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
....Heh heh heh... Oh god, but that was funny. Especially Kakashi-sensei's talk with Naruto on a 'proper' Sexy jutsu transformation. ......heh..-_-;
 Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 11, 2004 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved your fanfic!Kakashi's sucha pervert!I wonder what he looks like without the mask?I wonder of he's cute?Why the hell an I asking that knobody know AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!Tomuch sugar oh well gota go and kill my doctor for prescribing me steroids bye bye(^_^).
 Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2004 21:48 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"I'm making Christmas cards of it." That was priceless. Had me laughing outloud. Wasn't that OOC. cdk
 Title: THANK YOU FOR THE COFFEE BREAK!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 09, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was good! The best Naruto fic I read all night. I bet Kakashi-chan is SUPER CUTE, W/O THE MASK. HELL HE'S SUPER CUTE WITH THE MASK! GOOD WORK!!!! JA NE!!!!
 Title: *giggles hysterically*
Reviewed By: Okashira Paige  On: February 11, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was fab! Please write more "Makeout Paradise" goodness, featuring Team 7 and the gorgeously, mysterious, laconic, Kakashi! Hell, your Sasuke was totally great also!

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