| "The 3-some Series" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Ide On: April 14, 2006 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everybody loves these: so when are we gonna get some sequels? You can have Misato/Kaji/Ritsuko, Aoba/Hyuga/Maya, Toji/Hikari/Kensuke & Shinji/Mana/Mayumi among others...plus Kaworu could get involved too. Shinji/Rei/Kaworu?
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Title: what the hell?
Reviewed By: Firebranded On: April 11, 2006 12:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
"but this was different. It didn't seem as mischievous, it was almost as if she was sharing herself with two people whom she was meant to be shared with. She shrugged away these deep thoughts for the moment and returned to Asuka." Seriously, why did you even bother with this? A random sexplanation like that is pointless and out of place here.
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Reviewed By: Cl4yivi0r3 On: November 17, 2003 23:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This is some funny stuff. lol, bologna pony. :) Unfortunately, not very believable, but still fun for a while and worth a read.
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Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHAHH the ending is friecken funny |
Reviewed By: darkrider852 On: January 28, 2003 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story dude. keep writing like this and you may become famous-darkrider |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad, get more, anything eva will do. eva eva eva! more! check ur spellin though. |
Reviewed By: amara On: December 05, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool fic |
Reviewed By: amara On: December 05, 2002 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a cool fic |
Reviewed By: SephirothVII On: December 09, 2001 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an ok fan-fic, many spelling errors and the sex could have been a bit more arousing. But good, nonetheless. |
