| "For What We Have Never Possessed" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: wingates [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 05:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm guessing a huge chunk of the story somehow got taken out because it cuts from the end of chpt 1 with Heinkel fighting the vampires to the beginning of chapter two and she wakes up in bed next to Anderson. I'm pretty sure I read this fanfic in the psat and there was ALOT in between those parts. please fix it! and tell me when you do.
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Reviewed By: Wolfe On: November 03, 2004 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this has to be the only Heinkel/Anderson fic out there... It's so wonderful, my two favorite characters getting together! This has to be one of the best fics I have ever read!
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Reviewed By: kasumibear On: March 09, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Its my favorite^_^
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Reviewed By: ayanechan On: March 09, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this alot
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