| "Final Fantasy VII: Reverie" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Why the urge to edit?
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 08:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Curious, I never bothered to ask but why the sudden urge to edit your previous chapters?
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Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well overall the story was great and even the descriptions were extremely detailed surprised me! But the thing that bothered me was that you went into different timelines in almost every chapter and that during the story you didn't use marks (like this ******) to point out when another event took place. Overall the story was good and the story (and you) have my full attention (That alone is incredible I fall asleep in class too much) Thank you for your time. By the way I am required to do this: Your Friendly Neighborhood Reviewer FFXInuyasha1
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Title: It`s been awhile
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um......yeah,isn`t funny how you can look back on all your old reviews you submitted and think you made yourself look like a retard. "Rock da house".....yeah. I went back and read FF7: Awakening and now I think this story is much more confusing. Yeah....by the way,on Fanfiction.Net my username is TomStrife and I left a couple reviews for you. Also see my fanfiction "Final Fantasy: The Ultimate Quest" and tell me what I need to do to improve the story. Please Sephlier,I really miss your review tips!!!!!
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Title: I love this story!!
Reviewed By: Amy (I couldn't bother to log in) On: March 13, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only do I love this story, but I just love everything about it! You have such a talent and I enjoyed reading the prologue (I must say you have me hooked!) with Leira and Sephiroth. You have such great details and descriptions (even I'm wishing I could write as well as you!) not only with characters but with scenery. I once again must applaud you for continuing this background story (or history) on Leira and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
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