| "Payback's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't care if kagome's OCC i still love it! and i call guys sluts all the time.because that's what they are.all guys ever do is talk about the bitch he fucked last night and the one who gave him haed last week.sorry if you guys out there don't like what i'm saying but you know it's the truth.so my final words,you get em girl and wright YOUR story the way YOU want to!i'll be waiting for your next update!
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Title: Kitz
Reviewed By: Kitsy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 19:55 EDT
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Hey! I luv ur fic! Oh and call someone a man whore and I'll be a ok okie dokie!! I don't mind how everyone is actually!
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Reviewed By: legendarysilverfox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who could have a problem with ur writing??? i think it's good, so everyone who has a problem with it should just fuck off. i understand the mind of a 13 year-old cause i am one, so i side with u on the writing. by the way, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! it's a bit like mine but i'm thinkin about keepin it in the pg-13 - r rated area. i love stories with kag's out of character. her character in the story is a bit to innocent of my likings. if u wanna read a funny/different type story please read the one i have up right now and review it and tell me what u think. thanks. later.
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Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 17, 2004 00:12 EDT
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Such colorful words...I never said I had a problem with Kagome being OOC (I know what that means, moron.) I just said that she was being a slut , and then she calls him one. So she is being a hypocrite. She said she was "far from it", and she is completely being one...By the way, don't bother to answer to this message. I decided to stop reading your fic, so trying to insult me will be completely useless seeing as how I won't even see it. So ya see, it's kind of like talking to a wall.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 23:38 EDT
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wooh.........
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Reviewed By: RekkaShinen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed this fic! I hope you update soon! ^-^ To the person who thinks men can't be sluts or whores... Tell them they can shove it where the sun don't shine. Men can be considered sluts and whores. I know a few who can be classified as such. Keep up the good work!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 18:50 EDT
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Anyone who thinks men can't be sluts is OBVIOUSLY very young.
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Reviewed By: Niko gurl On: June 16, 2004 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic. I never review unless I liked the fic alot. I mean its one of the top 5 on my mental list. Please keep going I really like this one.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:04 EDT
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wow, that was a crazy blow up. i've had things like that happen and its not to much fun. I cant wait ot read the hcapter chapter, Inuyashas reactions? i know it will be great.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: June 15, 2004 13:58 EDT
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I haven't finish reading it..but I like your idea..but in a way I don't like it...I can't explain..I mean the idea of it is good. And the way you write is okay...I guess it's just that Kagome is so out of character...but you never know how she's going to act in the future. So I'm going to say keep up the good work and update as soon as possible..I'll continue reading as long as you continue writing and I guess I'll get used to Kagome's behavior...bye and love MN
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Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 15, 2004 01:34 EDT
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Okay...you need to learn how to do actual paragraphs...Each time someone different speaks, it is supposed to be a different paragraph. There are other rules and exceptions, but I'm too lazy to get into detail. Also, Kagome IS being a slut so why the hell is she saying she is "far from it." Plus, what the hell was that? "The only slut here is you"? Uh...one, Inu Yasha is a guy. So he can't be a slut. Maybe a two-timer or gigolo...Two, that was the worst and lamest comeback I have ever heard...
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow Kagome got deep in the end well don't leave us readers hanging and up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Jazelda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:05 EDT
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Great fic! I luuuuuv Kags new attitude keep postin pleeeeeeez
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool story! please update soon! personnaly i think this story rox! now....UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UP DATE!UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: bubbleskami On: June 12, 2004 00:48 EDT
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Hey person! This is really cool! I love acting like that! It is soo fun! I pulled a similar act on the guy who likes me...that worked well! Anyways, awesome story! I wanna see more! Pweeze? I told ya I'd shoot! But ya didn't believe me! Why didn't you believe me?! Otay dat was random! Whoo! Randomness is fun! Yay! As you can see, I really like this story! Write more!!!! GO KAG! Be the slut! Rock on!! :)
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really really really really really really really really great chappie hope you up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 11, 2004 20:14 EDT
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lol oh god poor Inuyasha, its so awful for him to be so totally about Kagome but her not taking any of it lol. When will he learn? I cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 22:56 EDT
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Kagome is going to get Inuyasha good!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 18:08 EDT
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that was such a hilarious chapter. I love how Kagome is manipulating everyone here...well not everyone,, I guess just her and Kouga, but it was great. can't wait for the next chaptre.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 06:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story and can't wait till you up-date again^_^
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Reviewed By: youkai lover On: May 02, 2004 12:49 EDT
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have to be a Sess/Kagome fiction.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:35 EDT
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oh wow this is great. its about fucking time someone made Kagome not a useless little whiney brat. I love the hard time she's giving Inu Yasha and this fic can only get better with his suffereing.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 23:27 EDT
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update update update update la de da. la de da. sorry, on a sugar high!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Reviewed By: angelz_in_disguise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 21:18 EST
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kag's so evil...hehehe...inu's gonna get it this time...btw...WRITE SOON!!!LUV YA STORY!!
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Title: write another one pleaseeeeeee
Reviewed By: a.j.inu On: March 19, 2004 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please oh please write another chpter to this soon and i mean so soon it could be tommorow god that was a exciting story hit me back no that i have a nomber or some thing like that which i do i just snt givve it lol anyway write another pleaseeee
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Reviewed By: the little fox On: March 18, 2004 23:56 EST
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oooooh, i like, i like. i always thought kagome needed a mean streak. because she is exactly like my friend ashleigh. all sweet and peaches and cream and a mothering peace keeper. but she can be down right evil. besides, everybody needs an evil part, no evil=bad ^_^
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Reviewed By: Alucard12b [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:22 EST
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So far i have liked this fanfic it has an intresting story line and i cant wait to read more chapters
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Reviewed By: Ayimintoru On: March 18, 2004 19:04 EST
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I Read the first Paragraph thinking one thing: There's something called paragraphs
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 17:44 EST
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awww i thought you going to kill kikyo ... please!!! please kill her ... please
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Reviewed By: Shonasky On: March 17, 2004 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY KEEP GOING!!! -Shona Space out more and add more paragraphs!
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