| "Payback's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: June 15, 2004 13:58 EDT
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I haven't finish reading it..but I like your idea..but in a way I don't like it...I can't explain..I mean the idea of it is good. And the way you write is okay...I guess it's just that Kagome is so out of character...but you never know how she's going to act in the future. So I'm going to say keep up the good work and update as soon as possible..I'll continue reading as long as you continue writing and I guess I'll get used to Kagome's behavior...bye and love MN
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Reviewed By: lovergirl On: June 15, 2004 01:34 EDT
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Okay...you need to learn how to do actual paragraphs...Each time someone different speaks, it is supposed to be a different paragraph. There are other rules and exceptions, but I'm too lazy to get into detail. Also, Kagome IS being a slut so why the hell is she saying she is "far from it." Plus, what the hell was that? "The only slut here is you"? Uh...one, Inu Yasha is a guy. So he can't be a slut. Maybe a two-timer or gigolo...Two, that was the worst and lamest comeback I have ever heard...
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow Kagome got deep in the end well don't leave us readers hanging and up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Jazelda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:05 EDT
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Great fic! I luuuuuv Kags new attitude keep postin pleeeeeeez
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool story! please update soon! personnaly i think this story rox! now....UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!UP DATE!UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: bubbleskami On: June 12, 2004 00:48 EDT
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Hey person! This is really cool! I love acting like that! It is soo fun! I pulled a similar act on the guy who likes me...that worked well! Anyways, awesome story! I wanna see more! Pweeze? I told ya I'd shoot! But ya didn't believe me! Why didn't you believe me?! Otay dat was random! Whoo! Randomness is fun! Yay! As you can see, I really like this story! Write more!!!! GO KAG! Be the slut! Rock on!! :)
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really really really really really really really really great chappie hope you up-date soon^_^
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 11, 2004 20:14 EDT
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lol oh god poor Inuyasha, its so awful for him to be so totally about Kagome but her not taking any of it lol. When will he learn? I cant wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 22:56 EDT
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Kagome is going to get Inuyasha good!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 18:08 EDT
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that was such a hilarious chapter. I love how Kagome is manipulating everyone here...well not everyone,, I guess just her and Kouga, but it was great. can't wait for the next chaptre.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 06:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story and can't wait till you up-date again^_^
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Reviewed By: youkai lover On: May 02, 2004 12:49 EDT
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have to be a Sess/Kagome fiction.
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:35 EDT
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oh wow this is great. its about fucking time someone made Kagome not a useless little whiney brat. I love the hard time she's giving Inu Yasha and this fic can only get better with his suffereing.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha2892 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 23:27 EDT
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update update update update la de da. la de da. sorry, on a sugar high!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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Reviewed By: angelz_in_disguise [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 21:18 EST
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kag's so evil...hehehe...inu's gonna get it this time...btw...WRITE SOON!!!LUV YA STORY!!
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