| "Payback's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: write another one pleaseeeeeee
Reviewed By: a.j.inu On: March 19, 2004 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please oh please write another chpter to this soon and i mean so soon it could be tommorow god that was a exciting story hit me back no that i have a nomber or some thing like that which i do i just snt givve it lol anyway write another pleaseeee
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Reviewed By: the little fox On: March 18, 2004 23:56 EST
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oooooh, i like, i like. i always thought kagome needed a mean streak. because she is exactly like my friend ashleigh. all sweet and peaches and cream and a mothering peace keeper. but she can be down right evil. besides, everybody needs an evil part, no evil=bad ^_^
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Reviewed By: Alucard12b [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:22 EST
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So far i have liked this fanfic it has an intresting story line and i cant wait to read more chapters
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Reviewed By: Ayimintoru On: March 18, 2004 19:04 EST
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I Read the first Paragraph thinking one thing: There's something called paragraphs
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 17:44 EST
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awww i thought you going to kill kikyo ... please!!! please kill her ... please
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Reviewed By: Shonasky On: March 17, 2004 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY KEEP GOING!!! -Shona Space out more and add more paragraphs!
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Title: The Story
Reviewed By: Ancient Wu On: March 12, 2004 02:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great way to start off the story i really want to know what kagomes going to do so hurry up and update plz!!!
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Reviewed By: inuandkag_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool please update soon
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: March 03, 2004 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh this is really good i wonder wats gonna happen well please update soon and make the chappies longer pllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's sex toy for life On: February 25, 2004 19:31 EST
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YES FUCKEN UPDATE YOUY SON OF A BICH OR DAGHTER WHAT EVER JUST UPDATE NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK LOVE THE HOLE PAYBACKS A BICH SANAREO THING JUST FUKEN UP DATE 6
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's sex toy for life On: February 25, 2004 19:30 EST
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YES FUCKEN UPDATE YOUY SON OF A BICH OR DAGHTER WHAT EVER JUST UPDATE NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK LOVE THE HOLE PAYBACKS A BICH SANAREO THING JUST FUKEN UP DATE
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Reviewed By: lizardbreth On: February 15, 2004 08:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon I like your fic a lot ^_^
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 15:52 EST
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oooo well well well ive never seen kag as that type of girl ive read fics with her changing into a demon or becoming a very powerful worrior miko to kick inus ass but not one like this well coolie chappie and hopin for more updates soon cya!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 14, 2004 15:43 EST
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*blink* What is a Mary Sue? Well... Anyway... Sounds good! Keep writing! Adios!
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Reviewed By: P. Rivers On: February 14, 2004 15:31 EST
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i like the fic so far. I can't wait to read what Kagome does for payback. I'm all a quiver with anticipation
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