| "Marios B-Day" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Funny
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chitterlings can be spelled this way or these: chitlings, chitlins. Your story was very enjoyable. At first I expected something long and corny, but yours was great! Keep writing! And try to read my essay of my first saga Betrayal: Yoshi's Darkside on this same site! Lata!
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Title: Don't listen to that other reviewer
Reviewed By: Mecha Scorpion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was OK. Don't listen to that Red Devil guy who reviewed this. My only advice would be to have it be a little more than one joke per chapter.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I think I lost my soul when I read this. That was terrible.
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