| "Onyx Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree with LINGI but still this was a very sweet story. great job.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Heeroschibiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please i loved it*grinz*
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Reviewed By: LINGI On: February 21, 2004 09:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Gaara turnes into Shukaku when he sleeps. This doesn't make sense.
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