| "The Eternal Curse" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: animefreak492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 15:19 CDT
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This is a really good story. I can't wait to read teh sequel, so if you haven't started on it , please do so soon. Thankz much.
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 01:06 CDT
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eww my review sounds like inu kissed kag's mom..gomen! "her" in that sentence is kag...
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 01:05 CDT
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I liked this story a lot! I'm impressed you are 12..you write very well for how young you are! (forgive me i'm more than twice your age!!)it's descriptive in the right places, & has very good pacing throughout the story. i got a little confused at the end w/sango talking to the queen and inu kissing her & kag's revelation. i understand what happened but i think a little fleshing out there would be nice. i guess this review is a little late for that eh? hehe. i just found this story not too long ago. anyway! keep up the good work. i look forward to reading more of your stories.
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