| "Toy" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: darkanimefreak54(don't feel like logging in) On: February 24, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! ^__^ will there be more? I hope so! ^__^
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Reviewed By: amethyst_rose1993 On: January 21, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ Yay! I always read fics like this... don't tell Barbara. She'd kill me. Anyway, I don't even pay attention to grammer so it was great! Hurry up sith the next capter, I'll read it when Barbara isn't looking.
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love rape fic's... and i loved this one... hahaha... anyways... i loved it... keep it up... good job!
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Reviewed By: silvermoonstar-tenshi On: February 20, 2004 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ that was pleasant....eh well, not really, but it was fun to read(what? I'm a sadistic bitch) anyway...get the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
^^; u just let Bakura rape his 12-year old virgin hikari? ...Awesome!! *coughs* Yea, I'm strangely weird like that. So, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Leviaithan (GR) On: February 15, 2004 17:59 CST
Comment/Review:
red is sexy! Hey that was great! Good job! I can't wait until the later parts! tee hee! This story kind of reminded me of a poem I wrote about lust and stuff. Should I give that to my fasination?? LOL just kidding! I don't want to frighten the hikari! but anyways that was great! Keep writing! GR~~!!
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 16:57 CST
Comment/Review:
ummm... cood u make deh lemon loonger, jus a bit.. it ended reeeal fast X.x OTHERWISE.. it was a good begining, and ryou ish only 12, HA lol XD
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Reviewed By: heya :P On: February 15, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great so far please keep updating:D
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 15, 2004 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made Ryou down right psycho! And I LIKE it! I won't expectany fluff then.
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