| "The Art of Transformation" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Qem [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the ideas that were behind this. It was really fun and interesting to read. I liked the twists that were involved and the way that Sakura grew up realising that this wasn't good for either of them and the way that she dropped this situation. I kept changing my mind throughout the whole thing, it felt more like Sakura, but the details of Naruto - and that last transformation, the male body. The second chapter with Sasuke's point of view was also intriguing, seeing what had happened and how he was determined to try and live out this life and hope that a chance will come his way again. All and all, this was a really good story and I enjoyed reading it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Makokam On: July 19, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fanfic. And it was made even better by the fact that this story could not be told in any world that was not Naruto. It was a very deep and compelling read, and not doing Naruto's part would be a shame. I havn't read anything this good in ages. You need to finish it.
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Title: My Say
Reviewed By: blisblop On: April 13, 2005 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chap 1.Heavy atmosphere ,slick, sickning, bad under currents misguide you then a wrenching so so so sad end. Chap 2. Clears most points up,the why,the how,the real pain and waste is made apparent.It does not end without hope for redemtion,absolution.Interesting for sure,its well thought out and tricksy.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 14:41 CST
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Wow. So is that it? I would think there would be more. But I may be wrong. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: September 11, 2004 07:46 CDT
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that was so sad must have naruto's side
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Reviewed By: De On: August 19, 2004 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was beautiful, and well worth the read. I was surprised when I found out you had added a second chapter because, you're right. They are like two linked oneshots. Hope you're feeling better (with the carperal tunnel)and that writing this didn't hurt too much.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How many ways can I say I loved this.The first part was really sad but it became even more painful after I read the second part. Just incredible. cdk
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Reviewed By: hentaiyarou On: June 09, 2004 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very cool. I really like how twisted this fic is, and even though I was expecting the twist it still kept me on the edge of my seat. Well written, but also sad.
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Reviewed By: dragonsprincess On: April 26, 2004 17:39 CDT
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I thought this was absolutely amazing. I was well written, and for a one short had a few quick turns in it. It was sad though, I kinda feel sorry for Sasuke. Later dragonsprincess
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Reviewed By: Slice On: March 17, 2004 02:22 CST
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Oh that was confusing but really realyl good. Nice. Wow. Beautiful. And I think I get it. I'm at least starting to understand the scenes better now. ^.^ Yay! ^__^ *smooch* Beautiful Love, Slice
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Reviewed By: De On: February 17, 2004 15:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... That was really unique and interesting. A plot twister to the end. I like it! Good job.
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Reviewed By: kayoko On: February 16, 2004 11:29 CST
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omg.........this is one complex fic... i had to read it twice......it very VERY good a very interesting idea...*nods* i would actually like to see more....>_> i mean....poor sakura...and naruto..so mean..>_< wow *stunned* thanks for writing this
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