| "Our Summer Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: inuangel82(not logged in) On: May 29, 2005 18:29 CDT
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^.^ that was really good I totally enjoyed it! I hope you update soon and Imust say if that was only masturbation I'd love to see the lemon you write o.o
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Reviewed By: hitokiri battousai On: November 25, 2004 03:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Williesama On: November 24, 2004 19:53 CST
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Potaning! It's been so long, over half a year. Please, if you read this, add more to this.
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Reviewed By: shadow samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good can you finish it or add more please
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Reviewed By: Cheezit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, and entertaining. would like to see what happens! longer chaps though... update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Neko Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 22:54 CDT
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This was good. I noticed one error where you spelt 'speak' wrong in the last paragraph. And other than that it was to short. Everything else was great, just make longer chapters and you'll do fine. I notice this is a half a year old and judging from that you probably have no intention of finishing this. I wish you would though, I hope I am wrong. I try to be a helpful reviewer but there is little I can suggest.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 05:14 CST
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i would really like to see what happens next. Update soon!
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