| "First Win" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: *Bows and hands you a rose*
Reviewed By: Neko Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is nothing here you could have done better. Perfect ending, very in character. I'm impressed. Yusuke's childhood is a subject I've always been interested in, especially in his relationship with Keiko. Originality is 7 because I've seen this before(doesn't mean it's bad), and enjoyment 9 is because I'm a comedy/romance guy. 9 is really good anyway so it doesn't matter.
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Reviewed By: cyndaquil_mm On: June 30, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. I like how it made me think "this is why Yusuke is as he is." It is logical, and true to the characters, yet not what I would have assumed for myself.
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was one of the most beautiful stories ever. You have a very nice writing style and a good talent for angsty writing. I felt bad for Yusuke, but as a mother of a little boy, I know I would have told him the same thing Atsuko did at the end. You made her sound really cool.
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