"The Journey Home" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sonic16 On: June 08, 2004 00:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! That was ssssssssooooooooo cute!! Please hury with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: June 07, 2004 18:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please hurry up and update, this is to suspenseful! I need to know what happens!!!!!! I'll be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Babo On: June 07, 2004 00:04 CDT Comment/Review: IT was just the best!!Please email me when you update this story! babo_dono@yahoo.com and please put the subject as "Furuba Journey Home Update" if you can... PLEASE!! THank you!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane On: June 01, 2004 06:52 CDT Comment/Review: hidey Ho! you should really post this sucker on fanfiction.net it is really good and I like it. I read the whole sucker- getting pissed as it ended.
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Reviewed By: SaVaY(didn't wanna sign in) On: May 30, 2004 17:56 CDT Comment/Review: AGH!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:21 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Karma_Reaction On: May 30, 2004 06:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You love ending them like that and it sucks.... I want more..... Right when Akito comes you end the chapter.....Write more and soon please.
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Title: great job! Reviewed By: GoddessOf Destruction On: May 25, 2004 18:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay new chapter!!! Woot woot!!! I love this story and you are an excellent writer!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SaVaY(too lazy 2 log in) On: May 21, 2004 14:26 CDT Comment/Review: AUGH!!!! I need more!!! By ASAP I hope you mean today or tomorrow. When is she gonna tell him???
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Reviewed By: cecil-chan On: May 16, 2004 04:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i cant wait update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Sonic16 On: May 15, 2004 16:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HEY!! You can't leave me like that! Yuo have to update soon or i'm going to DIE!! PLEASE hurry! Keep up the good work.
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Title: macbaby1 Reviewed By: macbaby1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 00:27 CDT Comment/Review: This is just too evil. Are you trying to just drive us crazy? I am sitting here laughing to myself just thinking about what is going to happen next. Curse you smiling onigiri for making us wait!!!
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Title: Wonderful Chapter Reviewed By: Yuki The Rat On: May 14, 2004 21:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another wonderful chapter, and I just love, love, love the ending. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Sinnamonkat(not logged in) On: May 14, 2004 18:30 CDT Comment/Review: Well, of course I HAD to come here since you know how much I love lemons. ^_^ Great chapter... EVIL cliffy! LOL! Can't wait for the next update. You sure are keeping me on my toes. ^o^
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Title: cruel and unusual punishment. Reviewed By: SaVaY (didn't feel like logging in.) On: May 14, 2004 18:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: you are so mean! how could you do that to me?! lol, jk. but you seriously have to update soon or i think i will die. i mean it. i NEED more.
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