"The Heart's Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 17, 2004 18:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVED IT WAS SSSSSSOOOO CUTE ALSO KEEP WRITING MORE CHAPTERS WITH THE PAIRINGS YOU ALREADY HANE 1-10 I'D HAVE TO SAY 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: UPADATE!!! Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 16:08 CDT Comment/Review: Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!
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Title: YEAH!!!! Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 14:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm sooo happy that you uploaded the next chapter! It was awesome! You couldn't have done it better. ^^ It's fun reading about Chibi Kagome and Inuyasha. But if you planned the next chapter to be ten years later, that'll do. Just upload soon!!!! PLEASE!!!! Oh, and sorry 'bout your computer. Evil viruses. Luv your story. Upload soon and I can't wait 'till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rapid_Reader On: April 27, 2004 22:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good story, can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Purple jello On: April 27, 2004 01:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: yayse I'm loving your fic, its awesome and the fluff with Inu and Kag are jsut so cute..hehe..ok well please update soon I'm anxious to know what happens next.. **hugs** ^_^ uPdate soon!
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Title: ^^ Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 17:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was really good! ^^ I really can't wait 'till the next chapter, so you better update soon. Though, I must warn you, I can only go on Saturdays. . . But, it was awesome!!!!! Udate the next chapter soon. ^^ YOU MUST!!!!! OR YOU WILL SUFFER!!!! Please?? *Puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Mysterious AM On: February 17, 2004 09:28 CST Comment/Review: A very good beginning! A few spots were rough and hard to follow, but only a couple. The rest was well-written and interesting to read. And of course, Inuyasha and Kagome were being very cute there near the end! Anyway, keep it up! I'll be looking for that promised next chapter. ^_^
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