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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 01:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad... a little jerky perhaps, but it made it seem sort of funny. Very amusing, a little hot... not bad.
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Reviewed By: NGEfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was...Ok. The main problem was it was stop and go. maybe if it was smoother and less ... Irksome for lack of anything else it would have been better. The plot was greate the style of writing was what throw it off. Sorry.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: j0 On: February 22, 2004 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent; Please write some more ^_^ I like your style of writing, the way you state obvious things which I hadn't quite noticed before. I'd never really thought about how good a ceiling is at having conversations before you told me.. thanks ;)
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