Reviewed By: Dustbunny3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eek! I love this! The story is flowing and empathetic. Shizuru and Kuwabara are both beautifully IC. I like the idea behind it too. There aren't nearly enough stories about either of them. Just one problem: one sentence read 'He believed that his mother way dying...' where I think it was supposed to dictate 'lay dying.' But otherwise this was thourouly awsome.
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