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Title: Near Perfection
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed your story so far and can not wait for the next chapter to come up. The characters seem realy to the show and if you do change them at all, you give a reason that makes sense. I feel as if you put a great deal of time and thought into every sentence of the fanfic. So far there is only one thing that I find that is missing, where is Kuroneko. Sorry for say this, but it just doesn't seem right not to have him/her just showing up periodically for no reason. Otherwise great story.
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Reviewed By: fellow reader.... On: May 07, 2004 18:08 CDT
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awesome story :o)
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 13:55 CDT
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I laughed out loud when Meryl realized Vash and Knives could hear her thoughts! Poor girl. I can't imagine how invasive it must feel to discover your thoughts are no longer private. Also, Knives needing to get laid is just too amusing for words. I really can't wait to see where that's going. :D
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Reviewed By: Kai Maiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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Woo-hoo! yayness! write more soon! tis great!
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 14:56 CDT
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Hee...I enjoyed this chapter very much. This is a very well-written story, which as I'm sure you know, is quite a rarity around here. We readers sure appreciate them when we happen to stumble onto them. Knives does seem to be an evil genius villain! And sometimes I think he's rather Puckish as well. ^^ Wonderful job on this chapter. I hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Lucibelle On: April 09, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed reading this story so far. It is well-written, seems well thought-out, and at the end of a chapter, leaves me wanting to read more. Good job. I did find a few grammatical errors, and some sentences that were worded awkwardly--meaning it took a couple of readings to get what you were trying to say--but they were very few, and I probably only noticed them because I am a grammar-freak, and English major. But overall, excellent story, and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: zanni poo On: April 06, 2004 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad you mentiond this on the VxM group - I'm really enjoying it and might've never found it! It seems like a feasible continuation and I'm enjoying the progression of things. Please keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 21:43 CST
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Enjoyable and well-written. I really hope you continue. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Allen262 On: March 30, 2004 17:34 CST
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Up date yay!! Cya around!
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Reviewed By: Arafel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this! The scene where Vash accelerates Meryl's healing process is very sweet - and it's really in-character that they'd only acknowledge feelings when they think the other one isn't looking. It also makes sense that Knives might be convinced to lay off of Vash's "pets." Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: theoldfart On: March 13, 2004 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your continuation, although I had doubts at first. Your characterization is very accurate. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Allen266 On: March 12, 2004 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll give you a review you knew it sad when you get none or vary few. I'll post up at the group too! D@mm good so far!
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Title: Nice....
Reviewed By: shoujo22 On: March 12, 2004 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there, I just wanted to say great job! You've really peaked my interest so please continue. Okay? Keep it up ^_~!
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Reviewed By: xiao lung On: March 12, 2004 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so I just have to say I LOVE IT!! I really really really do! This is one of the best and most well written Trigun fics I have ever seen. I'll definately be around to the end of this one! :)
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: shoujo22 On: March 11, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why not continue? I think that you should! Please say that you will! Teeheehee but anyway, keep up the good work.
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