| "Family Ties" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very well written AU for Eva. I've enjoyed reading this and the occasional re-read. I like all the characters as you have developed them and I am hoping you plan on updating sometime soon. Please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Lord Deathscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm curious how or if you intend to have any reunion between Shinji and either of his family relations. I can see something of a heart wrenching emotional thing with the grandfather, but not so sure about Gendo. This is of course assuming that you intend to have him and them as blood related.
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Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon. I like this story and would like to read more chapters for this story.
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Reviewed By: Epitaph of the Nameless One [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shame on you, you promised at least annual update and it's already passed the expected date. Besides annual updates are a really bad idea to begin with, go for once every four months at least. (Unless there's something else you are actively updating, which I can see there isn't by the date of your last visit) Why isn't the angry fan girl keeping you in line?
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Reviewed By: Sammo909 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 06:44 CDT
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Very clever and inventive. 'Shinji Katsuragi', that's a new one, and what of Shinji's traumatic past? Will he be reunited with his father? Maybe join Project E? I'll be waiting for the next chapter, hopefully before April 2006
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Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: May 09, 2005 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Annual updates look realistic at the moment." Annual updates are not acceptable. I despise waiting and the thought of waiting an entire year for another chapter is supremely distastefull and unacceptable. Never leave a story at a cliffhanger and wait a year for another cliffhanger. By doing that you piss a great deal of people. Myself included. So please hurry up with the update. I want to know what happens next. Don't be cruel. Okay.
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Reviewed By: ke On: May 08, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very great, I hope you continue soon! I really enjoyed the AU.
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: April 27, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY AMUSING, I liked it alot. Your story is one of the most original I've ever seen. Please keep going.
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Reviewed By: Laser Crusader On: April 21, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excelent Story. IT is both hilarious and interesting. I sugguest you update this story more often if you want more reviews. Other than keep up the good work. This story is die for.
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Reviewed By: Raze On: January 19, 2005 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. I was wondering if you could continue it.
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Reviewed By: remmus On: March 23, 2004 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fucking good at this. Character interpretation is facsinating, writing is teh bwnage, and Misato is hot. gg
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Title: W007!!
Reviewed By: Drknss256 On: March 19, 2004 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w007!! flat out frickin W007!!! ummmmm.... what else.... W007 squared!!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 10:47 CST
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Intriguging. I shall be on the look out for more of this.
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Reviewed By: Steve VADER [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 05:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story from you. The setup is very different, it is something where the reader need to be accustomed to. But quite interesting. It will be very interesting to see how this story proceeds. Keep up the good work. Friendly greetings, STEVE -- www.vader-visions.com My site, my story, my gallery. Not for kiddies.
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Reviewed By: Et On: February 18, 2004 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when women are hanging off shinji it always makes a good laugh. Cant wate for the next one.
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