"Give a Reason (Harry Potter Style)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: GemJewel Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 12:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is cool, i feel sort of bad for usagi though. Continue plz. this story is fun
| Title: Great story!! Please continue soon! Reviewed By: Mii-chan On: February 28, 2004 02:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: More!!! I love how this story is going so far, and hope you continue it to the end. Question though. When SM Usagi replaced HP Usagi, what happened to Usagi's ten year old old counterpart? Where did she go, or did whatever bring SM Usagi to Hogwarts merge the two together? And if SM Usagi is from the time of Crystal Tokyo, how OLD is she physicallly when she took her counterparts place, because you said that 'Usagi' looked older than her HP counterpart.
| Reviewed By: lilkoneko On: February 20, 2004 19:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: o man...tat wuz intense...i just finished reading ur story. my heart wuz beating really fast when i wuz nearing the end of the chapter. haha. i love it, the story. plz update it soon, cuz i really wanna noe wuts gonna happen, plus ur a really good writer. and i lik both versions too, the revised and the unrevised. i hope u make the paring draco/usa. well..im off, cuz this turned out to b a long review. ja ne
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