| "Inuyasha & the box of Trojan Man condoms!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: not bad
Reviewed By: MLE On: April 25, 2005 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats wasnt bad.. i liked it.
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Reviewed By: kitty1990 On: March 05, 2005 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny. Wright another chapter to it.
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Title: Hey Again
Reviewed By: She-Devil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Laughs so hard that I fall out of my chair* OMG your great! I LOVE IT!! You got some great creativity. Yea the characters are outta place but damn its worth it with me laughin so hard. Yea Kagome sounded a little slutty and Inuyasha confesed (Which wont happen for a looooooong while) but its still great so far. I cant wait till u update. Hurry up...*grabs a metal baseball bat*... or die!! :-P
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 25, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it keep righting I think its really good. Right the next chapter as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaScholar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've watched the available Inuyasha series several times, and let me tell you, I know Inuyasha. The Inuyasha in your fanfic is hardly the same Inuyasha in the series, and thus I find it difficult to follow along. Inuyasha is someone characterized by trying to look strong to get women but being too wussy to actually make a move. This attribute is illustrated by his not making any kind of move on Kagome, even though she wants him. Your fanfic falls short at that point, however, as Inuyasha is too manly. Let's face it: Inuyasha would never confess in his life to Kagome, as long as it is. Look at Kikyou. He waited and waited but waited too long and oops, she's dead.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 07:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought that was pretty funny.. ^_^ I liked it.. Inuyasha is so adorable when he is clueless.. hehe.. Red boxers, bwahahaha... Oh... wait... am I the first review? OH yeah *happy dance* sorry... anyway, great fic ^-^
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