| "Hidden Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Cool story!
Reviewed By: Kagome lover On: August 28, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good story,it's just so awesome! I've read a few stories with the same plot as yours but none add up to yours,it's so enjoyable,and I like your writing style to.Your story is very good,but why are you not updating? I know your updating on fanfiction.net but why not here? Oh well your story is still great,but I just feel sorry for Kagome,having to go through hell, which makes me sad because shes my favorite charcter.All and all your story is great,keep up the great work,hope you update!!
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Reviewed By: Esha a.k.a Kouga_Lover_3056 On: August 20, 2004 23:30 CDT
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You're story's awesome so far!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^_^
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why don't you update to ch.4 like you did on ff.net?
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Reviewed By: Kayle On: July 11, 2004 02:28 CDT
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Wow this is really interesting so far ^^; poor kagome. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 21:18 CDT
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This is REALLY well written. ^^ This is the second story I've read that is about Kagome and Kikyo being sisters, and Kagome depressed, and Kikyo being the perfect one and the mother not loving her bla bla bla, and I still like them! It also makes me want to cry... But I think that's why I like them. It helps me realize that my life ain't so bad compared to hers... It's like self-help! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: sen IYL On: April 19, 2004 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could u make the rest of the storyy?? pretty plzzzzzzz i really wanna no teh rest of teh story i've been thinking that how does inuyasha likes kagome, and how will she accept him cuz kikyou would be mad then hmm i am still wondering so finish it off plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Sen IYL On: April 13, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ittt Wonderful idea Keep up I WANNA NO THE REST OF THE STORYYY
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Title: I'm just 10(really I'm 10 years old
Reviewed By: Lil Inu the second On: February 21, 2004 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats kinda like my life,empty,my friends left me ever cents 01/01/04.No one understands my pain really,I feel just like Kagome,kill me know,just kill me know!Well update soon.Oh yeah, and you should listen to "Poisen" its at http://seiji.webhost.otakunet.de/videoclips.html
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Reviewed By: dark huntress On: February 20, 2004 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good. I just hope Kagome can get a little bit of happiness in the next ch. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 16:41 CST
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This is so good, but so sad......please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MaryE On: February 19, 2004 14:17 CST
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good start so far--Kagome and Kikyou's personalities seem 'flipped'--Kag's life >.< how will Inu and Kag get together?? update soon!!
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