| "A simple question" Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is semi-original. The dialogue is a bit robotic and the characterization is off. Things happen and you can't quite tell why. You leave out parts that would explain certain things. I know you said you didn't know how to spell, but its not that hard to look up on the internet how to spell specific words, like pregnant. And its not 'Eternal' twins. Its Paternal.
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Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichiwa I love it so far I can't finish reading it all today so i'll have to finish it later but it's really good so far JA NE! Lady Kagome
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Reviewed By: InusGirlD [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it ^^ Please do write a sequel :P
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Title: shippokitsune
Reviewed By: shippokitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it greately and I can not wait for the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS CUTE BUT THE SEQUEL DOESN'T SOUND GOOD
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:49 CDT
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that was a really good story!!! i hope u never forget the love!!! love is a major part of every story no matter what!! so never forget it!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 21:58 CDT
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this was a good fanfic sure go ahead and do it
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Reviewed By: Inu addict [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHA I'M OLDER THAN YOU !!!!!BY 1 YEAR!!!!!~
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Reviewed By: SilverStar08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 15:48 CDT
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^_^
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 15:12 CDT
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Abit confuzzled. What happened to Kagome? ahahahaha funny kids. Still love it.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 13:36 CDT
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happy birthday!!! *throws confetti* niiiiiiiice story continue and update plz?
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 23:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg omg omg this is sooooooooooo great please update soon guess who back again
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Title: A Simple Question
Reviewed By: SilverStar08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! Today is my Birthday
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great I can't wait until it is updated
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Title: A Simple Question
Reviewed By: SilverStar08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 08:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!
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