| "I've wanted you forever and tonight" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: Twidle-Dee
Reviewed By: Nekosune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! Coolness! Too bad rape doesn't mean anything on the sex count! ^_^ Well, I'll just have to trust that you'll get a good sex scene in not to long from now... *grins evily holding a knife behind my back* at least, you better hope you put a sex scene in not to long from now... *cackles* Yamyams for updating and cookies and pocky for awsomeness! More yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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Title: spooky
Reviewed By: Darkdemon53 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U NEVER UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE SOON! plz?
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Title: spooky
Reviewed By: Darkdemon53 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE OR DIE!!!!! plz?
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 (stupid lil....) On: September 28, 2005 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP YOU DIDN'T DIE! ^_^ Nice lil rape scene, and well worth the 17 chapter wait! I was so excited to see an update for this story in my inbox today ^^() Awesome job and I can't wait until update again!
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Title: U83R 1337 H4X0R
Reviewed By: U83R 1337 H4X0R [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg iv been waitning for next chapter for too long!!! my "one eyed monster" is getting tired from being up the whole time. lol
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Title: Weee!
Reviewed By: Nekosune On: September 10, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weee! I loved it! Cookies for you and pocky for Jou-chan and Kai-chan! I'd say more but it's late and I have to wake up early tomarrow, so update soon for Yamyams and nighty-nigh!
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Reviewed By: Kurisushi On: August 31, 2005 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this fanfiction today and read through it. I don't normally read fanfic that involve vampires, especially ones that have MY Seto as teh vamp, but I am very impressed. It is a very good story. Waiting to see how you finish. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: cinque On: August 30, 2005 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i simply looooooove your story.its fantastic. thoug i have some problems to understand because of the slan jou use but thats my problem. im waiting for more *lechts*
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 09:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the update and sorry I didn't review sooner.
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Title: wheee
Reviewed By: another human, duh! On: June 28, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, as much as I hate to say it, you could use a little work on your spelling. I've caught multiple mistakes. Nevertheless, its still a great fic. I enjoyed reading it. I suggest you just pay more attention to what your writing, and possibly go over it when your done typing it up before you actually post it. I would do the same to my fics, if it weren't for the fact I quit writing them. Basicly, just smoothen out some of your sentences. I don't think there are any run on sentences, which I find most authors make. Overall, you're a good author, so keep up the good work. Later gator.
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Reviewed By: DreamCherry66 On: June 16, 2005 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.:licks the fic:. hm...I agree with non-evil Seto, needs lemon .:winks:. I'm allowed to have a dirty mind as long as the fic rocks! ^-^ Evil Seto is creepy. Plain and simple. Update your marvellous piece of work ASAP! -DC66
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ew, Jou was drinking Evil Seto's spit? And how come the only thing he was thinking about when Evil Seto was on him was "His eyes really should be blue"? That just seems weird to me. But still, the chapter's really good. But don't broil Jou again, I know and hate the feel of burned skin, and it sucks. Cya!
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 (no logging in) On: June 15, 2005 07:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! chapter 14 is formatted correctly! I'm sorry but the whole cursed thing is what I was thinking. I love this so far and I don't usually life Vampire fictions. You really know your mythlogical creatures. Can't wait to see what happens. ^_^
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so much. Keep it going and update soon. Great chapter.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
(This is a review of chapter one. If you would like a review for your other chapters, please submit them) I've read a lot of vampire fics before, but I have to say that I like this one (but I'm not sure if it would be considered AU, seeing as it happened after the actual show; then again, I haven't read the rest of the story yet). You seem to have a basic knowledge of vampire lore, which is good, because not many people do. The story so far is very enjoyable. I especially liked the cliffhanger at the end. It's the perfect way to get people to read more. Your sentance structure is a little choppy in the beginning, and the way you described how the gang turned out was a little too blunt. I think it would have been better if you gradually led into the lives of the others, instead of piling it all into what was basically one paragraph. Sure, the story seems centered around Seto, but the lives of the others seem important, so you shouldn't rush it. Your spelling and grammar are very good, so you don't need help with that. In fact, I would think you had a beta already. You just need someone to go over your sentence structure and smooth things out a little so that they flow better. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story in the near future. ~Pana
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