| "I've wanted you forever and tonight" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:44 CDT
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Wow... Seto's so awesome when he's gone vampiric and wants to drink blood!! Haha, love how he's teasing Jou w/ only a few good kisses at a time. And Jou speaks old English? *bursts out laughing* Oh, that was so funny... ja ne!
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Reviewed By: . On: September 06, 2004 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, are Yami and Yugi elves?
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Reviewed By: FREAK014 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive read some great fics before but this is1 of the best. its not something i expected its wonderful &much more. please update soon its just really good. trully wondeful, u have us entralled but this fic.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:39 CDT
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wtf...how can that thingy up there say your story is completed...it so is NOT! wheres the PWP? any slash? wheres teh sex?! *evil rawr*
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Reviewed By: a fan ^_____^ On: July 16, 2004 04:34 CDT
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i really do like this story ^______^ the writing is nice and the whole vampire/faerie concept, while commonly used, is still nice and new in your story (did that make any sense? you know what i mean ^_^) the only issue i see is that in the second chapter you mention that faeries age one year every one hundred, but if jou lived 15,000 years approximately, he would look about 150 @_@ so you might want to change the 100 to 1000 or make jou 1,500 instead ^_____^ otherwise, though, the story is perfect. good for joo! *applause and confetti* hurrah!
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Title: OK!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: July 13, 2004 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vamp fic plus fantasy fic?!? Holy hell that's good! I think I have to go read your other works now. Yes keep this up, this is just too much fun. I don't know if I can do that round robin thing as my life is undergoing some radical redefining, so my free-time has gone *poof*.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 21:07 CDT
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I kinda liked the dragons, they're very noble, even if they're noisy. And I never got why elves are considered bad in this fic. Can ya tell me why? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 18:36 CDT
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Thanks for correcting the chapter arrangement, now it makes sense. Man, the part where Seto was kissing Jou was very good, love it. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh good you updated, can't wait for the next. Update soon. ^_^
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Title: yami-shi-tenshi
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 10:35 CDT
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sweet I always loved your storys omfg please update I love your fanfics and I have a lot of yaoi frea fan people Ill be sure to go to the chat thingy but umm could you please email me the link at pyro_neko_07@yahoo.com
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Title: Your German
Reviewed By: NightClaws (verkohltseele@yahoo.com) On: June 15, 2004 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! I love it, and it's really original! However, in your chapter 5 you use some German and it's... wrong. 'Wo bist er?' means 'Where is (conjugation for you informal) he?' The correct sentence is 'Wer ist er?' which means 'who is he?' Sorry, i'm probably not the only one who's told you thins. Other than that it's a great story!!
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Reviewed By: Cyfris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 15:30 CDT
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SUGOI!!! pleasepleaseplease update soon!!! omg, this is soo cool ^_____^ hee, poor jou-kun, kaiba should administer CPR.....no wait, that wont work, nuts >__
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good chapter, I still don't understand the chapter before, I think it might go to one of your other ones, but hey, what to say I didn't enjoy it anyway? Really good work, hope you win that award! TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 14:42 CDT
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Um, Sweetdeily? I think u posted up the wrong chapter, cuz the story suddenly goes from Seto asking what a spell vision is to Jou w/o boxers and Bakura & Ryou barging in. But the chapter is... interesting. Although, I think I gagged and nearly passed out at the sight of Ryou on top of Jou. *coughs and retches* Don't do that again, plz. Update soon, k?
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't get the alternet ending...alternet ending from what?! TabiWolf
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